Todays offering is SQUICK! (some spoilers in my prestory rant)

[velvet_mace]

I'm feeling sick to my stomach for some reason, so maybe this is appropriate that I have this hideous thing to spew out here

Comments

[tir_synni]

*quietly worships*

[crazy_toffee]

Er... I usually operate by the 'if you have nothing nice/constructive to say, then say nothing'...so... in honouring my principle: I LOVE your writing to death, it's just so expressive and interesting, very clear and not abusive of the lexicon. Much love on that! But... I HATED this story to death as well; it just squicked me out of my skin. Kudos to you, few things get me to this level of 'argh-ness'. ^^ So, good...er... job? O_o

[velvet_mace]

Thanks... I think.

Funny thing is, I've got a pretty good tollerance for squick. My tendency is to laugh at it rather than be too grossed out. But WRITING squick is another thing entirely. For some reason, it's just a whole lot harder to rape poor Ed myself than it is to read someone else rape him. I feel somehow more ... responsible. It doesn't make a whole lot of sense. But I get the dual feeling you have-- oh that's good -- YUCK!

[crazy_toffee]

Er...yeah! Yay for YUCK! XD!

I actually have a much greater tolerance for squick when writing it, even if I still find it woefully hard to do. What actually squicked me to death here was Wrath's 'little trick'. ^^U

But, as I said before, I really enjoy your writing and how these events came to happen - or how you describe them- so...um... I'd still write it down as a technical victory with much kudos. XD

[velvet_mace]

Heh, you know about Wrath's little trick -- it's rare that an author can hide behind the words "It was indescribable" when she doesn't exactly knows how something works and get away with it. I'm doing a happy dance, cuz no one's called me on the carpet for being too lazy ass to actually properly describe something.

[forgottenlover]

::a slow, creeping grin comes to her face:: That was simply lovely. ::saves::

Do keep it up, I adore the disturbing

[velvet_mace]

Thanks. I adore disturbing you.

[forgottenlover]

I didn't say *I* was disturbed ::amused::

[radish_lily]

Oh my.... well, that was an interesting fic.

It's an interesting take on this threesome, though I had to go back and reread it because I got interrupted the first time... >.>;; you can blame my little sister for that. XD I guess there's just something about Ed the way you wrote him here...

Anyway, well done. :D

(you may blame my inability to say anything that comes remotely close to a well-thought out comment on the plotbunny that just rampaged through my head. XD I already wrote it, but currently I'm sorting through the shambles it left my brain in. hehe.)

[velvet_mace]

Ooh, which plot bunny would this be? Something related?

[radish_lily]

Actually, it's a Russel/Ed one that sprang up after I rewatched the last ten episodes of FMA. Not really all that related, but... XD

[kat8cha]

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