Longing [Oneshot]

[velvet_liquor]

Title: Longing
Author: velvet_liquor
Beta: paralyzing_time
Chapters: Oneshot
Pairing: Aoi x Uruha, implied Reita x Ruki
Genre: Smut and romance
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Hot? X3
Summary: “He had reached the point where his longing for the older guitarist was preventing him from concentrating properly, even from thinking straight.”

Comments

[koihitoyo]

MY SPOT! *falls with the pot of coffe* *-*'

Now I have My spot, I'll read 8D.

[koihitoyo]

SOOOOOOOO 8DDDDDDDDDDDDDD *CLAPS* NOW TELL ME THAT URU MESSED UP WITH THE 'RECORDING ' BUTTON AND MR MANAGER AND MR SQUIRREL ARE GOING TO LISTEN 8D *CLAPS HANDS*! because that would be epic 8D

Buttons printed ass *gligglesnort* hehe :3~! If I were Aoi I would love to mess with Uru's BUTTons 8DDDDDDDDDDDD *GETS SLAPPED*

Ok, I'll make a decent comment. A coffee filled one... But decent \:D/
First of all... RUKI! 8D! RUKI IS EPIC CUTE T^T, if one day I day, Ruki shall replace me as the Koffeeala. But I totally can see him standing there like a stubborn child while Reita has to break his resolve. See why I think that Ruki has DA SHORT SEME POWAAH \ 8D/? He'll do anything he can to get what he wants. And Reita... Reita is too sweet to say no T^T *grabs him*

And Uru is too cute to T^T *clings to his thighs* Just like one of those kids? ;³; You know... I want to hug him like NOW. And Aoii Too T^T *grabs them and you and take em to the room* ;^;

“But I don’t have lube… Will you be okay?”HOW YOU DON'T HAVE LUBE AOI?! YOU'RE URUHA'S FRIEND

[velvet_liquor]

I love how you always make huuuuge comments <333 *o*

Never thought about messing with the recording button xD Who knows, maybe there will be some real action in gazette's new single xDDDD

I don't know why, but I always end up with a cute Ruki <3 He look like he want everyone to think he's bossy, mean but, in fact, he's just a cute kid =P Makes me want to write a fic about them xD But yeah, he has TEH seme powa xD... And... *gasps* O_O I GOT AN IDEA!!!! oh marvelous marvelous marvelous! XDDD I HAVE A FUCKIN' IDEA XDDDDD \o/

Cuddles in the room, yay! \o/ *o*

8DDDD Aoi isn't any Japanese pervert, so he doesn't carry lube everywhere.. XDD only condoms 8DD looks like a huge ad for condom use xD
I swear I'll make a fic where they don't have condoms... 8D XDD

And now, I'll sit in front of my notepad with my pencil in hand... And I'll find a scenario.. XD (or the end of one I had already planned out 8D... Yeah, I'm gonna do that... hey, I have two almost finished scenarios xD god, I rock 8DD)

Good evening sweetie <33

[bananakek]

Awww, that was so sweet. And hot 8D

[velvet_liquor]

^___^

Thanks for reading =]

[ritsumatsu]

This is a well-written, nicely woven story.

I'm a little disappointed that it had the whole lovey ending though. It would have been such a spectacular twist if after they jumped right to studio sex Aoi had said, "That was a great break, ready to get back to work?" or something equally as callous to trivialize the act.

Totally love your idea of Reita being the cure for a fit-pitching bitch though. Their interaction was downright adorable!

[velvet_liquor]

XDD Never thought about that but, yeah, it could have been rather surprising 8D
Reita is just so sweet ^o^ I love those two together <3

Thank you for reading ;) <3

[silveryxdark]

HAHA MIXING TABLE!

Well anyway, that was sweet and sexy and yaaaay AoixUruha smex in a studio 8D

[velvet_liquor]

Yay \o/ Now they just need to prove us that they're doing in in their studio 8D Suddenly, recording DIM would be a lot more interesting xD

Thanks for reading! <3 =D

[chocoholic_noiz]

xDDD le coup de la table etait excellente.
J`espere juste que c`etait pas en marche pendant qu`ils etaient en train de ...
j`y pensais trop le coup de `uruha a appuye sur Enregistrer` xDDD

Et le nain en train de peter son cable lol
yeah j`adore ^^

[chocoholic_noiz]

xDD j`avoue.

enfin maintenant on s`habitue a l`anglais ..
Il m`arrive meme de plus savoir retrouver les bons mots en francais alors qu`en Anglais tu y arrives tres bien x)

Bon maintenant je saurais a qui je pourrais parler francais 8D

[velvet_liquor]

Hum, ça aurait pu être intéressant d'appuyer sur le bouton enregistrer 8DDD Mais je préfère réserver les trucs tordus et cochons pour les fics à chapitres 8DDD
(encore quelques petits détails à arranger et j'attaque ma prochaine chaptered-fic xD Nierk nierk 8DDDDD)

Et, Ruki est juste trop diabolique comme ça 8DDD Je l'imagine trop en train de bouder dans son coin XD