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bara_kitten December 23 2010, 17:19:00 UTC
stop calling it shitty writing.
its not shitty. its incredible.
i'm really excited for more <3

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velozziraptor December 23 2010, 22:22:13 UTC
Thank you <3

I really want to update again today, so we'll see how that goes...

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atl17 December 23 2010, 17:33:49 UTC
"He could’ve kicked himself for that. ‘Oh, and just in case I haven’t made enough of a dick of myself tonight- may I undress you, too?'"
Oh my god I'm crying
but really no this is one of the best stories on here okay? i love every single second. afjslkfjaogireoghae i hate the cliffhangers.

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velozziraptor December 23 2010, 22:23:03 UTC
I know.. I really need to stop with the cliffhangers, hey?

Also, I'm glad you liked that line because it was one of my favourites!

Thank you so much.

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velozziraptor December 23 2010, 22:23:46 UTC
I can't promise to stop breaking your heart just yet.

Thank you!

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sweetyyouhadme December 23 2010, 18:15:30 UTC
so i just got my internet back and read everything i missed
and
I FUCKING LOVE THIS OKAY <3
never stop writing it (i know eventually you may have too but i can dream)
and it's not shitty writing, it's marvelous
<3

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velozziraptor December 23 2010, 22:24:49 UTC
Thank you so much!

I will have to stop writing eventually, yes. But I have ideas for the foreseeable future, so not just yet =)

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quirky_anecdote December 23 2010, 19:28:02 UTC
Can I just say how amazing this is?
I've been catching up with it and everything, and I love it so much, it's nowhere near shitty, and it's actually one of my favourite fics on here. I love everything about it; your characterisations, the whole plot, your writing style, just everything.

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velozziraptor December 23 2010, 22:26:25 UTC
Oh my god, thank you! Massive compliments right there.

I'm blushing profusely.

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