work in progress... I think Shadow actually needs a bit more personality...

[velorwen]

Shadow pretends
acts all is well
Heart secreted
an inadmissable self

Whisper darkness
scream the night
Pushing farther
than wrong than right

Beyond dreams' edge
shadow remained
Light painted label
judges sinners stained

Sensual hurt
wakened soul
Restraint frees
breaking in to whole

Shadow hides there
light insight
Look alike normal
illusions

Comments

[ecstacy4mp]

I think shadow is exploring a new world and cannot share the secrets with others.
Very nice poem.
Happiest New Year to you and yours.