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FIC: This Is Where I Lose Myself

May 21, 2011 23:00

Title: This Is Where I Lose Myself
Author: _samalander
Fandom: ST:AOS
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 1096
Warnings: Character death.
Characters/Pairings: Kirk/McCoy, OFC
Summary: Jim has to write a letter.
Notes: For rubynye's prompt at the jim_and_bones Flash Fic Challange: The first time Jim has to write a letter home because a crewmember died, and Bones trying to comfort him (not ( Read more... )

character death, angst, character: ofc, slash, character: leonard mccoy, character: jim kirk, pairing: kirk/mccoy

Comments 19

lindmere May 22 2011, 15:31:28 UTC

One of the things I loved about TOS!Kirk was the way he cared about every member of his crew, and you did a wonderful job showing that's true of "our" Jim as well. I also really liked the fact that it was an average crewmember doing a boring job--everyone servers, after all.

_samalander May 22 2011, 16:13:48 UTC

Oh, this is a lovely comment and I'm so glad all of that comes across in this little bit!

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_samalander May 23 2011, 02:19:21 UTC

Thank you. :)

I just hope he always is.

tresa_cho May 23 2011, 02:31:49 UTC

Oh man. Where did I leave those tissues...

_samalander May 23 2011, 16:04:20 UTC

Aw, I have extras!

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_samalander May 23 2011, 16:04:25 UTC

Thank you!

savoytruffle May 23 2011, 05:47:38 UTC

That was very moving and really rang true in its simplicity.

_samalander May 23 2011, 16:12:47 UTC

Thank you very much!