Fic: Odyssey of the Mind, part 4/4

[veldeia]

Title: Odyssey of the Mind
Author: Veldeia
Fandom: Iron Man movieverse
Pairings: Tony/Jarvis, Tony/Pepper
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I own no one and nothing, except for a messed up mind that likes playing with other people's characters and universes.
Summary: It seemed to go on forever. Tony was starting to think that this was it, that he had lost

Comments

[ladylahatiel]

...wow. Oh, my god. This was...

Can I get back to you with more coherent praise tomorrow? Like, actual examples and stuff? Because right now I'm just enveloped in visions of Jarvis and Tony cruising the Internet together and I'm just giggling at the idea of them fucking with Wikipedia, pranking Microsoft, posting on forums...

*giggling. Srsly. Nonstop*

This was amazing. I'm going to read through it again, beginning to end, and then I'll be back with more. Promise. :o)

[veldeia]

Awww *hugs* I think incoherent praise feels more praiseful than coherent praise! :D Not that I wouldn't appreciate coherent comments, too, I'll be a very happy girl if you find the time to write some :)

And yes, smug as this may sound, I SO think the ending is just made of WIN! ;)

[strange_loops]

What a cool fic! I have to admit that I had no idea what was going on until Tony talked through the house speakers, and even then I didn't quite have it right :)

I would love to see what happens next(do Tony and Jarvis go on wild internet-surfing adventures together? how do Pepper and Rhodey take the news?) - are you planning on a sequel?

[veldeia]

Glad you liked :) Sadly, no, I'm not planning on a sequel - I may be posting a little coda I wrote to this where Pepper finds out, if I decide it's any good. A sequel with Tony & Jarvis net-surfing would be something I'd love to read, but something I doubt I'd be able to write, seeing as total crack!fic isn't usually in my repertoire. ;)

[tonpep1]

I commented over on ff.net, but figured I would here too since this is where I first found this amazing story. The whole concept was so intriguing and the way you wrote it was fantastic. I loved Jarvis and how you showed how much he truly cares for Tony. I, like another reviewer, started thinking of Tony and Jarvis using the internet as their personal plaything, lol. I can't even imagine all the trouble they would get into. Really, really well done, you should be proud.

[veldeia]

Thank you, for both the comments! <3 The concept is by no means thanks to me or my imagination, it came from Hypervelocity, although my take on it is very different from the original comic. And boy, am I glad people actually find this cool and don't get all "Whaaaat noooo you made Tony an AI!", since I was originally sort of afraid I'd get that sort of a reaction. :)

[btsxbeta]

It was my pleasure! Fics like this are why I am so happy to offer my beta-ing services. Creative, great characterization, snappy dialog, and just in need of a wee polish to show their finery off to the best advantage. WOO!

I had a blast with this, and am looking forward to your next work of awesomeness.

[veldeia]

Huge big thanks & love & everything :) :)

*heads off to plot her next awesomeness*

[lazaefair]

Best way to be reintroduced into Iron Man fandom ever. This is original and brilliant and ripe for all sorts of meta-humor. I wonder if Tony will discover his fandom. *g*

[veldeia]

Best way ever? A fic that's pretty atypical to the fandom? Not that I'm complaingin, though! Thank you. :)

Oh yeah, "uploaded!Tony discovers his fandom" is definitely one ficlet someone should write. :D