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Music Meme ~ Dastan/Tamina "The Last Time" (English)

Aug 16, 2010 13:24

Title: "The Last Time"
Author: vejibra
Beta: misspinkpuppet
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Prince of Persia
Pairing: Dastan/Tamina, light Garsiv/Tamina.
Words: 2,230
Warnings: angst, romance, affairs, and broken promises.
Notes: I love to write about angst, maybe this story isn't really the ideal Dastan/Tamina storyline, but I would love your comments about it :D. Thanks to my ( Read more... )

fandom: prince of persia, fanwork: drabbles, fanwork: multichapter, !english, pairing: dastan/tamina

Comments 6

gydas August 17 2010, 04:01:53 UTC

That was amazing! I kinda have a soft spot in my heart for angst! Especially involving Dastan and Tamina! Really awesome job! Totally saving to my memories! ♥

vejibra August 20 2010, 04:12:10 UTC

♥ Thank you very much! :D. I love angst, maybe is some kind of my style xD. Anyway, thank you so much for reading this story :D ♥, I'm very happy that you liked it! ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥.

Thank you so much for reading! :D

shipper4ever August 17 2010, 05:43:30 UTC

This was so good and totally so sad just like the song 'reason". I loved that they allowed themselves comfort and passion with each other despite their respective marriages to others and that they had 2 beautful children borne from their illicit unions. Although not politically or morally correct perhaps, but liaisons like theirs were not uncommon during that time & period. Also I liked the fact that Garsiv prolly knew what was going on but ignored the obvious. Damn,traditions are good but sometimes it is such a pain. Well done!

vejibra August 20 2010, 04:14:27 UTC

;_; Thank you so much for your comments about the story ♥. I'm very happy that you liked it, I promise I will write another one with a little more happy ending :D. Also, living this kind of relationship is very hard for the two of them, even so they try so much to be together in their illicit unions, that give them two wonderful children.

Thank you so much for reading it! ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

aimakichan August 18 2010, 02:58:23 UTC

God, that was ridiculously angsty and so beautifully written!

vejibra August 20 2010, 04:15:27 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm very happy that you liked the story, I love angst so much ;_; I simply couldn't resist to write about it ;_;. Thank you so much for reading the story! ♥