Something silly I wrote while stuck on my ownfic fic

[vegablack62]

Title: After A Bad Day At Work
Author: Vegablack62
Characters: Neville/Hannah
Rating: G
Word Count: 100
Summary: Aren't summaries for a drabble superfluous?

“You have your father’s frown,” Hannah said as she rubbed the crease between his eyebrows.

Neville had to smile. “His frown? You say a man has his father’s smile not his frown. No one has his father

Comments

[lyras]

Aw. :) This made me smile.

[vegablack62]

Thanks! I was smiling while I wrote it.

[clionona]

This was sooooooooooo lovely, darling, as is all your work.
But I wasn't smiling at the end. I felt sadness. Maybe because it brought to mind all of the things of his father that Neville could have had.

Wonderful, wonderful stuff. A hefty emotional punch in so few words.

♥

[vegablack62]

Thanks for liking this piece.

That was a slip on Neville's part. He meant only that people didn't think he looked like his dad and he liked having something that looked like him. But at the same time your right, the situation with his dad is always there in the background. He missed out on all the things from his dad that he could have had.

[vegablack62]

Thanks! I didn't see it as sad, but I can definitely see how it could be read that way. It's interesting the different way readers can respond to things.

[supergreak]

Darling. "might as well be the eyebrows"

[still_infinity]

Aww,

what a treat to read. Thanks for sharing.

[vegablack62]

You're welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to write.