Bad Moon On The Rise

Jun 08, 2009 13:16

“I’m sorry,” Neville said, and winced.  The words were out of his mouth before he thought and now it was too late to take them back.

“Sorry!” Lavender snapped.  “Sorry for what? Sorry for living?”

“Maybe,” Neville mumbled.

He’d irritated her. He’d spent his life irritating people.  She was miserable, frustrated with her scars and her ( Read more... )

lavender, neville, nosmutforyou, drabbles

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vegablack62 June 11 2009, 05:50:53 UTC
Thanks! This is the first true 100 word drabble that I've ever written. I'm glad you liked it; I was especially glad that you liked Lavender in this.

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phil_urich June 11 2009, 02:07:07 UTC
I liked this. Its nice to see Neville still being Neville even after the battle's over. That last line was particularly poignant. I wonder what Lavender had to go through as she made changes to her life.

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vegablack62 June 11 2009, 06:01:06 UTC
I'm glad you liked this. I thought the situation was a little sad, it's interesting to see other people's reaction. Thanks for your comments. (I think both of them had some problems after the battle.

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