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NCIS Fic: Paris to Serbia (Ch 9)

Oct 23, 2011 17:33

Series: Paris to Serbia
Chapter 9: Between the Shadows
Author: vegawriters
Fandom: NCIS
Pairing: Jenny/Gibbs
Timeframe: Pre-Series
Rating: Adult
A/N: I’ve always had a problem with the idea that Jenny rose to her position in NCIS so quickly. So this series gives some history not only to Gibbs and Shepard, but also to Jenny’s past and where her skills lie.
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jenny shepherd, jethro gibbs, ncis, paris, p: ch9

Comments 8

on_jennys_terms October 23 2011, 23:47:18 UTC

Fantastic as always. The pieces are starting to fill in.

vegawriters October 24 2011, 00:12:05 UTC

As always, thank you.

I'm glad the pieces are filling in. I'm always terrified I'm opening up some new door. lol

satanic_viper October 24 2011, 05:59:34 UTC

So many great lines in this chapter! Of course as I'm reading, I'm thinking about what to write in this comment, and I'm picking pieces I may want to quote...but now there are just too many :P. Love love love it all! My little heart's just scared about what happens when the portal between reality and undercover fantasy closes. Hic hic...

More soon, please and thank you!

vegawriters October 24 2011, 06:04:39 UTC

Having plotted it out, I'm both very heartened and totally heartbroken as to what happens. But I'm so glad you're liking it considering I love it and I've put Ziva on hold to write it. ;)

More this week! And thank you again!

satanic_viper October 24 2011, 06:14:08 UTC

Le sigh...Sometimes it sucks having a natural affinity for doomed, dysfunctional couples xD.

vegawriters October 24 2011, 12:58:38 UTC

LOL. Amen to that.

ddagent October 24 2011, 22:44:04 UTC

This was a freaking amazing chapter! You know full well how much in awe I am of your writing! This chapter was definitely up there - I love the way you write Jenny, and how much you're putting her through. Just the way she takes it shows how strong she is.

Plus this chapter was very hot *fans* I love Jenny and Gibbs. I love this fic!

And for some reason Salvo is now Christoph Waltz in my head.

vegawriters October 25 2011, 20:38:21 UTC

I don't know Christoph Waltz. I shall have to look and see. :)

I didn't realize it when I was writing it, but I have totally fed into one of the flashbacks of them in Paris with this scene. Developments to come. *grins*

Thank you for loving this!