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NCIS Fic: Paris to Serbia (Ch. 5)

Sep 29, 2011 11:21

Series: Paris to Serbia
Chapter 5: M-5
Author: vegawriters
Pairing: Jenny/Jethro
Timeframe: Pre-Series
Rating: Mature
A/N: I’ve always had a problem with the idea that Jenny rose to her position in NCIS so quickly. So this series gives some history not only to Gibbs and Shepard, but also to Jenny’s past and where her skills lie.
Disclaimer: I keep falling in ( Read more... )

p: ch5, jenny shepherd, jethro gibbs, ncis, paris

Comments 5

ddagent September 29 2011, 21:50:37 UTC

As I mentioned in my comments on chap # 4 - I love the psychological and case file aspect to this. The way you write Jenny, the endurance she goes through is staggering. This is an incredibly well written fic, and I love the balance you provide with Jenny and Jethro trying to get to know each other.

More please! :D

vegawriters September 29 2011, 22:25:32 UTC

Thank you. I am totally doing this by the seat of my pants when it comes to how the case goes down. I am more than happy to listen to the voices in my head and trust what they're telling me.

But I tell you, after watching some of those old Chicago Hope clips today ... I totally want to write young-Jenny fic. And I might have to do a whole other universe because writing her undercover ... ha!

Okay, Stopping now.

alidiabin September 30 2011, 06:59:19 UTC

I like the way you write Jenny in this fic. She's vulnerable and strong at the same time.

And my god you are making me love this pairing.

vegawriters September 30 2011, 14:40:06 UTC

Thank you!

And yay for getting someone sucked into the pairing. Hey, I fell into it randomly myself.

proseac1 October 24 2011, 05:04:02 UTC

Finally found a bit of time to catch up with this wonderful story. I love how you've woven in the canon events - it's seamless, and makes this seem like just another part of canon.