Falling Slowly

[veeveeboo]

Title: Falling slowly
Author: VeeVeeBoo
Pairing: Jonghyun/Key
Rating: PG
A/N: A really random one from Jonghyun's POV because i felt like it. Sorry if it made no sense >You watch as he flails about, laughing beside you about some lame joke Onew had just made on the show. Your lips melt into some sort of a dorky smile but you don't even notice

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My Demand: That you PLEASE continue the story for the RIGHT OF ALL JONGKEY LOVE!... The Price...

[tutdao_rakfah]

The price that I'm willing to pay is..:

MY LIFE! LMAO.. you made it absolutely perfect and built up so much drama in four short paragraphs! But now you gotta end it duuuddeeeeeee XD I will surely walk around with a "will dance for continuation" if it really comes to that

Anyway, overall GREAT JOB =D

Re: My Demand: That you PLEASE continue the story for the RIGHT OF ALL JONGKEY LOVE!... The Price...

[veeveeboo]

Thank you for reading and for this awesome comment =)
I wanted to keep it short, but it ended up as some kind of a ficlet instead of a proper drabble /fails
Haha anyways i'm still not sure if i will write a continuation.
So glad you liked this^^

[cracknut23]

OHO.
MY DEAR KUEH MEIMEI, CONTINUE THIS SUSPENSE PLZ LOLOLOL
And I like Jonghyun's observant self, yeaaahhh-- but wait, why isn't Kibum happy (being kissed onstage in front of the nation, ok, yeah, my question does not make any sense... >.<)?
BUT IT'S JONGKEY AND FICTION they're married irl, I'm convinced.

[veeveeboo]

NOOO you did not just call me by my surname, and in caps no less O__O
*digs a hole and hides*

And haha i never said Kibum wasn't happy about the kiss, he's just shocked (i mean, what do you do when your male best friend kisses you unexpectedly in front of the whole nation). xD

Thanks for commenting <3
JongKey is interesting to write xD i think i'm only gonna write jongkey (maybe some 2min since they're my 2nd fave pairing) in future.

[cracknut23]

I need more of 2min after that koala hug.
Maybe some fluffy, gentle smex afterwards. jk. Don't listen. /awkward laugh

[veeveeboo]

i'm no good at writing fluff/smut ><
i think i'm gonna try angsty next. idk xD
and yes that koala hug is epic 2min =)
cannot unlisten /laughs

[shineeblue]

woah~! if this ever happens, heaven would be full of fangirls... and fanboys? if there ever are... -.-

really nice... wow, jonghyun is like the flame, and key is the moth who can't help but be mesmerized and drawn in... ^^ anyways, he won't be burnt or die... coz jonghyun would surely be there for him, too... <3

thanks~! ^^

[veeveeboo]

i swear, they are both attracted to each other xD
but in this one, Jjong simply cannot resist Key anymore

anw thanks for commenting!

[panda_ayu]

heheheh i really liked this drabble!!
omg kim jonghyun totally needs to think before he acts.. but *squeal*
i would die (of happiness) if this really happened!

[veeveeboo]

thanks for reading!
haha he can't think properly because Key's amazingness has got to him =)

[vsays]

Oh hai, I've been seeing you around Omona's FFA today (yesterday?) and it reminded me about this fic you wrote (that I read ages ago) but never got to tell you how much I love it.

It's lovely ♥
You hear nothing but your drumming heart. And the next thing you knew, you were kissing him in front of a thousand people onstage and on live broadcast around the nation.

But you don't care,you don't even register to the commotion that has ensued around you like a thundering tornado. Because the person you care about the most is right in front of you.

[veeveeboo]

Hello fellow omonanian =)
Thank you so much!
Gosh, i never thought that anyone would still remember me or my fics since its been so long.

I'm taking a break from fic writing now, but i hope that i'll be able to write more fics for you guys soon. thanks for this comment and lots of love from me ♥

[vsays]

Actually, I don't even remember how I ended up stumbling upon your journal but I do remember being head over heels for this story -- and still is ♥

And yes, write more whenever you can. I'll be lookin forward to your new stuff in the future!