Alias Fic: One Missing

May 12, 2006 20:26

For monanotlisa and yahtzee63, a Jack/Nadia fragment. Rather completely AU, and there should be a warning for melodrama.

Title: One Missing
Author: Vanzetti
Rated: nothing graphic.
Spoilers: oddly enough, none, since this occurs in some other post-season 5 continuity.

Nadia has imagined the scene )

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yahtzee63 May 13 2006, 01:00:09 UTC
Melodrama be damned, I love this. You can't stop here! I KNOW you mentioned the hotel for a reason.

The awkwardness of the meeting, especially the part where Nadia's thought about it before, is especially nicely done.

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vaznetti May 13 2006, 01:33:48 UTC
I'm glad you liked the awkwardness (and didn't mind the melodrama!)

As for a continuation, you know, sure -- awkward dinner, maybe a long walk, and then... I remember how bad and wrong this pairing is. ::facepalm::

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yahtzee63 May 13 2006, 01:42:50 UTC
The BadWrong is what makes it WowHot. You just have to remember that. :D

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vaznetti May 13 2006, 02:49:55 UTC
Hee! Us people with no social lives need to stick together!

I'm glad you liked it. (Also, it looks like my first SPN fic is going to be something like five ways Dean and Krycek didn't meet. I am so darned predictable.)

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celli May 13 2006, 06:09:50 UTC
Oh! I like!

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vaznetti May 13 2006, 14:01:13 UTC
Thanks!

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vaznetti May 14 2006, 23:39:48 UTC
I started writing this for you a little while ago, actually, as a spy_santa thank you, so I'm glad you liked it. And denial is always good.

Thank you so much for this BEGINNING OF A LONGER STORY.

You and Yahtzee are SO SHAMELESS!!!!! They can't get together! He was married to her mother! It's wrong! Bad and wrong! ::holds head and hads and tries not to think about how hot it would be::

Um. I'll think about it.

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laet_v May 15 2006, 07:05:35 UTC
Waouh!
It's intense and sad, and altogether hopefull...
Sometimes, my heart beats quickly, and I think I'm Nadia... Damn!

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vaznetti May 15 2006, 13:17:45 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you fund it both sad and hopeful -- I was trying for something like that.

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