Alias Snippet

May 17, 2005 22:56

Sark, this season, some time after his escape.

the ghosts that should be hounding him are silent )

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vaznetti May 18 2005, 06:08:14 UTC
Thank you for commenting! I'm glad you liked it.

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zarahemla May 18 2005, 04:58:17 UTC
rina... He never expected to be free of Irina. If her turns his head, he thinks, he'll see her out of the corner of his eye, watching him, disappointed in the sentimentality he displayed by coming here. She will smile, and he will go to her.

aieeeeeee !!! beautiful.

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vaznetti May 18 2005, 06:08:34 UTC
Thank you!

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ciara32 May 18 2005, 06:16:46 UTC
well done!

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vaznetti May 18 2005, 09:06:54 UTC
Thanks!

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rez_lo May 18 2005, 10:10:13 UTC
Oh, I picked the right day to come back and read my "essentials"! This is lovely. I don't know whether I've ever mentioned my gratitude for the air of--vulnerability isn't quite the right word, but something human like that, that you give Sark. It underscores his solitude, which is central to (my ideas about) the character.

Belated congrats on being finished!

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vaznetti May 18 2005, 12:28:07 UTC
I think Sark is a very disturbed young man, and I try to express that when I write him. He's done some very bad things, and I suspect that he's suffered some very bad things as well, and he's just not sure how all that shakes down. I think that's the not-quite-vulnerability thing. I'm glad you liked this -- I hope it helps me back into the "writing" groove.

How have you been, anyway? I've missed seeing you around here.

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rez_lo May 18 2005, 18:58:55 UTC
Fear and confusion are at hand, which I take to be the next phase in this... thing, this thing I'm doing. Whatever.

I miss you too. I don't seem to be able to communicate at all recently. I'm glad you're writing fanfic again.

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vaznetti May 18 2005, 20:42:48 UTC
Oh dear. It sounds difficult. Can I help in any way?

I'd like to write more fanfic, now that the desperate lecture-writing has come to an end for a few months. We'll see.

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