LJ Idol, Exhibit A: Week 1: This Is My Life Now (Am I Crazy)

Jan 24, 2013 18:39

The morning sun warms my bed. Eyes still closed, I listen for the familiar bustle of the bakery downstairs; Father pulling the first loaves out of the oven, Granny chatting with an early customer ( Read more... )

lj idol, week 1, exhibit a, fiction

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jem0000000 January 26 2013, 09:56:23 UTC
I'm glad she was able to find a new life. :)

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lrig_rorrim January 26 2013, 17:27:32 UTC
<3 So much love for well-done fantasy. Exploring the consequences of magic - for the magic user, and for the people around them - is fascinating to me. So many questions for this young lady, and you handled them all with grace and skill and respect. Love it!

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kittenboo January 26 2013, 18:09:44 UTC
Well done!

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baxaphobia January 28 2013, 01:15:25 UTC
I really enjoyed this. I was really engrossed in your character's world. Nicely done.

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cheshire23 January 28 2013, 04:19:40 UTC
Love this. And I can't help seeing bits of allegory here, since some groups treat science or technology (in general or specific types) in the same way that magic is treated here. Or even academic study, especially for girls. *sigh*

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