Comments | variousflumps: Fic: Eight First Times/Sparkle (Alicia/Kalinda)

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Fic: Eight First Times/Sparkle (Alicia/Kalinda)

Oct 10, 2012 11:29

Title: Eight First Times/Sparkle
Author: variousflumps
Pairing: Alicia/Kalinda
Rating: PG
Summary: The one where A and K are not remotely smooth/The one where there's a ring.

Author's note: Archiving two short fics written for sweetjamielee's excellent ficathon. New fic coming soon.

( The kiss - they’re both a little drunk. Kalinda breathes like she’s at altitude. Alicia grabs onto Kalinda’s body and inadvertently fondles a breast )

rating:pg, fanfiction, alicia/kalinda

Comments 2

badfluffy October 11 2012, 09:51:09 UTC

I had read Sparkle (love it!) on the Ficathon page but for some reason (temporary blindness?) I totally missed on Eight First Times and since it's been a while since I last slept, all I can think of is Awwwwww. (Very definitely NOT an appropriate comment for all your hard work but it's what I have right now).
It's short but sweet and I like the humor, the intimacy and the rhythm. And the end. Aaaah the end. Just awwww. Again.

schwarmerei1 October 11 2012, 11:19:00 UTC

I agree with Fluff, Eight First Times is lovely, sweet and very funny. And incredibly re-readable. I remember it well from ficathon and it was just as delightful today.

Sparkle is also charming.
There were a lot of expressions that she liked putting on Alicia’s face, these days.
*cough* Really? And what would that...

It seems vitally important at the moment to I believe there can be happy Kalicia in the future. Keep writing!