Sweet Mercy - Chapter Eleven

[vanityfair00]

Summary: Auror Hermione Granger is investigating strange occurrences in the north of Scotland. Her search leads her to the one man she can't trust and the one man she can't solve the case without

Comments

[sneaky_rhae]

I loved it! Thanks for posting it even though you don't like it much. I really think it is great. I can't wait for more!

[vanityfair00]

I'm just anxious to get onto the plotty things, but they needed to talk so they did. Thanks!

[shiv5468]

Poor Severus, she really is keeping him on a string and all unnoticed. :D

[vanityfair00]

He's been alone for a very very long time, I think.

[keladry_lupin]

Poor Severus. Bending over backward because he wants a really good shag a little affection, and Hermione just isn't getting it!

Well, you might not have liked this chapter, but I sure did. Thanks for updating!

[vanityfair00]

She is so focused on her job that it might take throwing her on the bed and having his way with her for her to get it. But we'll see....*whistles innocently*

Glad you liked it!

[lunafish]

I really like this chapter. They're really coming together in such an emotional, human way. And that bar scene was just too funny!

[vanityfair00]

Thanks! That was one of the few moments in the chapter I enjoyed writing.

[foudebassan]

I loved how Severus literally got bitten by a bunny :D The build-up between the two of them is also great - will the next chapter see the shag at long last?

[vanityfair00]

Shag so soon? It's only chapter eleven...I could pull this out for a while longer. *laughs evil laugh*