Comments | vanitashaze: Fic: Mary, Melusine, Mary, Medea [SGA, McKay/Sheppard, PG-13]

vanitashaze

Fic: Mary, Melusine, Mary, Medea [SGA, McKay/Sheppard, PG-13]

Jul 04, 2009 18:49

I swear to God, this story kicked my ass, but hopefully I kicked it right back. It was a sort of personal challenge - I wanted to see if I could do a, the creepy, and b, a mostly-linear story that didn't involve my usual scene breaks. That part was very hard, I tell you. Anyways, housekeeping: Quite a bit borrowed from Celia Bell's "The Impossible ( Read more... )

stargate: atlantis, fic, cliche bingo

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vanitashaze July 7 2009, 22:40:13 UTC

Thank you!

valderys July 5 2009, 00:20:44 UTC

Wow, that was lovely, such beautiful imagery and language. So creepy too, a real horror story, and John comforting himself with his 'leave no man behind' mantra that he knows is a lie... That was fantastically atmospheric.

vanitashaze July 7 2009, 22:40:41 UTC

Atmospheric was a definite goal, so, thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it.

pir8fancier July 5 2009, 00:32:05 UTC

So good.

vanitashaze July 7 2009, 22:41:04 UTC

Thanks.

fanficfan July 5 2009, 01:12:28 UTC

Eerie in the best ways.

vanitashaze July 7 2009, 22:41:15 UTC

Thank you.

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vanitashaze July 7 2009, 22:42:22 UTC

I am itching to solve the mystery, and know I never will. Those really are the best horror stories, in my opinion: where there is no resolution or explanation, only the cold truth of what happened, and that it might (will) happen again.

Thank you!