Comments | vanicola: falling; kris x lu han, pg13

vanicola

falling; kris x lu han, pg13

Jun 29, 2013 02:29

falling; kris/lu han
pg13. tw: slight glamorization of teenage suicide, character death
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( kiss me hard before you go )

rating: pg13, fandom: exo, genre: angst, length: oneshot, pairing: kris/luhan

Comments 30

paradisist June 29 2013, 15:42:20 UTC

This is so good

And then Lu Han has to remind himself why he’s here again. He is here because the world doesn’t want them to be together. He is here because maybe another world will want them.

“God, I love you.”

This has all been planned, carefully constructed. Here are his last moments, already written out, already mapped.

It's all happening so vividly in my mind and with the picture you provided on the top it's like I'm watching the car go on, with Kris stepping on the pedal and them swerving off the road, darkness surrounding them and another kind of darkness rushing to meet them when they land, but then again this darkness is their gateway to another world where they can be together without any obstacles.
Loved this.

<3

vanicola June 29 2013, 19:52:41 UTC

ah thank you for the lovelier than life comment~~
thank you so much for reading as well

atheend June 29 2013, 17:30:48 UTC

so sad, but this was written very beautifully!
I enjoyed reading it!

vanicola June 29 2013, 19:53:05 UTC

yes it was very sad i am still sad why did i write this
thank you for reading!

lyto June 29 2013, 19:29:53 UTC

Ah....this was really pretty..

and the picture is from downtown LA and I drive that route every day....simply gorgeous

vanicola June 29 2013, 19:53:39 UTC

thanks!
yeah, i didn't notice, i just copped it from tumblr. LMFAO. but i see it now, it says 'Dodger Stadium'

roughly_yours June 30 2013, 00:16:52 UTC

Oh my god that was so beautiful! Very touching! All the places that Luhan reminisced about... ;____;

roughly_yours June 30 2013, 00:20:44 UTC

Wait.... are you from Sugar Land?

vanicola June 30 2013, 04:18:18 UTC

thank you~
im in sugarland for the next month or so x____________x

roughly_yours June 30 2013, 05:20:58 UTC

This is so creepy but I live in SL

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offlying_turtle June 30 2013, 05:51:23 UTC

god my heart hurts. this is so sad but it's written so beautifully well and...

"....but he’s sure that the last thing that he feels is the cold touch of a ring against his cheek, along with the taste of love against his tongue.

i just love this so much.

thank you for this pretty piece. ♥
definitely memming this.

vanicola June 30 2013, 19:34:00 UTC

ah omg thank you so much that's very kind of you
being memmed is my favorite thing in the world
thank you for reading!!