Fan-fiction. Harry-Ginny drabble, Let him take charge.

Oct 25, 2010 12:48

Title: Let him take charge
Author: vanessawolfie 
Rating: GP
Pairing: Ginny/Harry
Word Count: 100 words + 4 title
Disclaimer: All fiction, JK Rowling owns it all.
Warnings: Angst, sadness and HBP + DH spoilers
Summary: What did Ginny think when Harry left her.
Notes:A drabble about Ginny's feelings of Harry's decision. Prompt from sarahblack Do something cute with Ginny and ( Read more... )

rating: general public, type: drabble, fanfiction: hp, lj friend: sarahblack, harrypotter, genre : angst, writing, pairing: ginny/harry, fan fiction, my writing

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sarahblack October 25 2010, 16:43:13 UTC
This was definitely cute, if a little sad. Thank you! I didn't notice any glaring errors, either. :P

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vanessawolfie October 25 2010, 16:47:12 UTC
Thank you for the lovely review and the very good prompt. I think I do much better with prompts rather than without them, I sometimes just don't know what to write because there are so many possibilities.

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sarahblack October 25 2010, 16:49:14 UTC
You're welcome!

I hear it's a common problem. Thankfully, there are a lot of communities for writing and prompts and things like that. hildigunnur probably knows more about it than I do, though. :P

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hildigunnur October 25 2010, 20:58:24 UTC
I liked this. Love that you obviously gave this a great deal of thought but were able to condense it into a lovely drabble.

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vanessawolfie October 25 2010, 21:01:36 UTC
Thank you. I was writing this just before midnight and I had to go to sleep sometime so I decided to just make it a drabble. Took me about an hour or maybe a little less. I started writing all these different versions but they all came down as if Ginny wasn't independent and was letting Harry control everything or something and that just felt out of canon. But I liked how this came out.

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brinimc December 30 2010, 19:43:43 UTC
Awww... that was so sad. And it sounds like it could be a good lead into a Ginny/Another person or even Ginny/Harry (ew) story. I love this line: "Sure, if I would go with him I’d probably get a few scratches, it could even do me great harm but my heart would still be intact and I would have a reason to live." I think it really sums up her heartbreak.
Aww, and that last line really makes Harry sound like a douche! :(

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vanessawolfie December 30 2010, 20:17:28 UTC
it's sort of supposed to be a lead into a Ginny/Harry story... with angst and much much Ginny alone.... and stuff... it's a long story...

I was so proud of this little drabble as it says so so so so much about her feelings... and just everything.

And Harry was a bit of a douche about this in the books... but it ends alright... in the JK Rowling book end :D

Thank you so much for commenting. :D

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bleedforyou1 January 16 2011, 23:09:12 UTC
awwwwwwww <3

Curse you for making me kinda like Ginny in this!

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vanessawolfie January 16 2011, 23:10:35 UTC
Don't curse me ... You have to like Ginny in this because Harry's such a douche in this :D

Thank you for commenting.

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