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bleedforyou1 December 19 2010, 21:12:01 UTC
*tear*

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vanessawolfie December 19 2010, 21:13:29 UTC
yeah ... I don't know what came over me ... I just took a pen and paper and wrote some stuff down .. :D Thank you for reading and commenting :D

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hildigunnur December 20 2010, 00:01:25 UTC
Love how you use repetition here, creates a rhythm of sorts and makes the poem more effective.

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vanessawolfie December 20 2010, 09:13:28 UTC
Yeah ... I know what you mean .. thank you for reading and reviewing ... :D

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dreamerkimo January 17 2011, 14:10:40 UTC
"I wanted you to find happiness
so I left you.
But you didn't
because I'd left you."
That's so right. Dean will only be happy by Sam's side.
I Love it, short but touching. (*tears*)

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vanessawolfie January 17 2011, 18:58:09 UTC
Yeah ... that describes my work .. short but touching.
The funny little thing about this is that I didn't write it for SPN. Didn't even start writing it with fanfic in mind, just wrote.
Then I sort of wanted to share it but didn't know what fandom to post it in ... HP, SPN, Twilight, or just something else. Then I read it over and found that it could fit so well with SPN.

Thank you for commenting.

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