YES EXACTLY idk I don't like when it's like mpreg and not some kind of weird alternate universe where it's ok and everyone's ok with it? If it's set here, then reactions should pretty much be 'wtf?' I also hate 3-day pregnancies, so I was like okay...skipping random months here and there?
I NEEDED light and fluffy after writing Growing Down (and YAY, that fic was pretty much my NaNoWriMo project so I put a LOT of effort into it)
ehhh angst wanted to be in this story, but there was no room for it ;]
I. YOU. Um. Just. ... Look at that, the gorgeousness of this fic has killed my brain.
Anyway, seriously? I adore this.
Joe’s laugh was like pure sunshine and first snowfall all at the same time, like the rain after a drought. Then their lips met, clashed as Joe kept his balance so he didn’t fall on Nick and crush him. I thought this was wonderful and beautiful and exactly the way Nick would hear Joe's laugh... idk, I just really loved this bit.
at least I read this!paulsdollDecember 19 2009, 05:22:09 UTC
"And oh, did Joe kiss back - he was kissing Nick back as if it were the last stretch of a really long race and Nick were the glorious and coveted First Place medal." THIS IS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN. I LOVE HOW YOU SAID IT HERE.
"Joe’s laugh was like pure sunshine and first snowfall all at the same time, like the rain after a drought." THIS MADE ME SMILE SO HARD MY CHEEKS HURT FROM IMAGINING IT.
Okay, first, Mama Jay is awesome in this. Exacly like I wanted her to react. Your Mama Jay is just the perfect mother when it comes to incestuous boys. Second, Joe. I wanna marry your Joe. Like, OMG, he's so fucking cute and he helps Nick so much, it breaks my heart. And the porn all over the fic is marvelous, because it's not dirty, it's perfectly combined with the romance! Two girls!!! Awwwwhhh! I want to see them! Will they have curly hair or straight? I forever love you! You just amaze me every fucking time! Don't stop!<3
Re: at least I read this!vanessatolinsDecember 19 2009, 06:28:15 UTC
Awww ily too! And those are some of my better lines lol. As for the porn...I didn't want that to be everywhere :) they wanted romance and fluff! And I did too haha Im so glad you enjoyed it bb
Ok. So. Here's a funny story. I was searching for mpreg on delicious (because I'm desperate now. Absolutely desperate for some mpreg. Good mpreg. (Christ, do you know how hard it is to find legitimate, well-written moreg?) And, anyway, I was searching my favorite pairings and when I searched Joe/Nick, this came up and at first I was confused because you changed your layout. XD And then I was like OOOOOH VANESSA! And then I was like... Oh. I remember this fic. I flailed over it a lot. And then I was searching through the comments and I didn't see me there. And then I realized that I never read part two. Which. wtf. I have nooooo idea how that happened. But it ended up being ok, because I really needed mpreg and it's... it's like when I used to bookmark my books with dollar bills and then when I go back through the books, I find the money and it makes me really happy. Yeah. This was kinda like that. And that's my story. lol Nothing would make me happier than if mpreg existed in real life. XD
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I don't like when it's like mpreg and not some kind of weird alternate universe where it's ok and everyone's ok with it?
If it's set here, then reactions should pretty much be 'wtf?'
I also hate 3-day pregnancies, so I was like okay...skipping random months here and there?
I NEEDED light and fluffy after writing Growing Down (and YAY, that fic was pretty much my NaNoWriMo project so I put a LOT of effort into it)
ehhh angst wanted to be in this story, but there was no room for it
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Um. Just.
... Look at that, the gorgeousness of this fic has killed my brain.
Anyway, seriously? I adore this.
Joe’s laugh was like pure sunshine and first snowfall all at the same time, like the rain after a drought. Then their lips met, clashed as Joe kept his balance so he didn’t fall on Nick and crush him.
I thought this was wonderful and beautiful and exactly the way Nick would hear Joe's laugh... idk, I just really loved this bit.
So. Yeah. I love it!
xoxo
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that was one of my favorite lines
this is one of my favorite fics
just
yes
IDEK
It's so cute and light and they're so happy!
<3
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THIS IS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN. I LOVE HOW YOU SAID IT HERE.
"Joe’s laugh was like pure sunshine and first snowfall all at the same time, like the rain after a drought."
THIS MADE ME SMILE SO HARD MY CHEEKS HURT FROM IMAGINING IT.
Okay, first, Mama Jay is awesome in this. Exacly like I wanted her to react. Your Mama Jay is just the perfect mother when it comes to incestuous boys.
Second, Joe. I wanna marry your Joe. Like, OMG, he's so fucking cute and he helps Nick so much, it breaks my heart.
And the porn all over the fic is marvelous, because it's not dirty, it's perfectly combined with the romance!
Two girls!!! Awwwwhhh! I want to see them! Will they have curly hair or straight?
I forever love you! You just amaze me every fucking time! Don't stop!<3
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Nothing would make me happier than if mpreg existed in real life. XD
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it's ironic b/c i was thinking of giving Because the mpreg twist.
FOR YOU I WILL
and i LOVE randomly finding money
xD
but yes...mpreg really needs to exist.
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