"Passenger" (Chapter Eight)

[vanessalovejoy]

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc of the "Twilight: Saga" are the property of Stephanie Meyer. The original characters and plot are the property of said author. No copyright infringement is intended.

Chapter Eight

"Honesty
Is what you need
It sets you free
Like someone to save you
Let it go
But hurry now
There's undertow

Comments

New reader 8)

[itsagayhole]

I just started reading your fic about a month ago, and I absolutely fell in love with it! I've been waiting for you to update, and I'm so happy that you did. I must say, it was definitely worth the wait! I hope you're better now after all you went through 8)

PS, I love the songs you choose for the chapters. They always fit so perfectly into the story!

Re: New reader 8)

[vanessalovejoy]

Thank you so much for the great feedback, so happy that you fell in love with the story, because I love it as well ;)

I'll have a new chapter out as soon as I can, promise!

PS to your PS, haha - I try very, very hard to find songs that are perfect for J & B, and it's really fun for me to find one that melds well with a chapter that I write. Thanks for noticing!! :)

[twiordie]

I think I've found a new favorite song! Hiiiiiii!! I'm glad you're feeling better now, really missed ya here! This chapter was beautiful.. finally they kissed! Yippeee!! Can't wait for what happens next :)

[vanessalovejoy]

Isn't it a great song? I'll be honest, I had a completely different song, AND it wasn't Bella singing it - it was Jacob! (I'll let you in on the secret, it's was Elvis' "A Little Less Conversation, a Little More Action". Jake's subtle hint to Bella that is was time to stop all the talking and apologizing, and get on with the making out already haha.) Anyway, I heard the Colbie song on the radio the day before I was going to post the chapter, and was like, 'yup, need to just completely re-do the end, and have Bella singing this song to Jacob'. Soooo, I'm super excited that you enjoyed it!!! Thanks as always for being an awesome reader!

[vanessalovejoy]

I saw the other review, so I'm actually going to give you my lengthy reply there - buuuttt, I just wanted to say hey, and thank you for coming over here to show your love as well! ::*hugs*::

[miwalicious]

so sweet and romantic (i mean the last part ;)). i like it when bella does things in fanfic that some people would deem OOC. like going to a disco, getting drunk, etc. teenagers do that. and since bella is supposed to represent an average teenager, why not.
bella's friend in the story is usually awesome and yours is no exception :)

[vanessalovejoy]

I LOVE Cass. She is basically my best friend in real life personality wise, so she's been pretty easy to write for. And I think a little OOC Bella is particularly important when you're writing a flash-forward type story. People grow up and change in four years, so it's not very OOC at that point IMO.

Thanks for the review!! Hope you keep enjoying! :)