Countless love

Jul 18, 2006 10:48


Driving into more and more distances, the long, winding highway glitters under passing chariots. It leads to countless doors: blue ones on quiet streets, red ones on stone houses, a thousand sidewalks approaching the park with a fragrant rose at every corner.

At any opportunity one of these drivers could stop paying attention. When I felt the smack ( Read more... )

relationships, consciousness, creativity, my own favourite writings, cosmology

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vaneramos July 18 2006, 15:12:03 UTC
Thank you. In the groove this morning. :-)

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ubermunkey July 18 2006, 15:07:22 UTC
wow
great stuff
be well
Van

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vaneramos July 18 2006, 15:13:17 UTC
Connor, hit me and shatter me.
Love,
Van

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ubermunkey July 18 2006, 19:12:28 UTC
All illusions evaporated and left me alone in the instant of love.

I really enjoyed this line
this isn't the first time you've given me shivers
nor do I believe that it'll be the last

So many instants of love to remember, and to look forward to.

connor

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vaneramos July 18 2006, 19:31:23 UTC
to watch cool shade move endlessly through your eyes

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halation July 18 2006, 15:22:35 UTC
you
are so beautiful

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vaneramos July 18 2006, 18:43:55 UTC
your words beautify me. :-)

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justapostcard July 18 2006, 15:50:41 UTC
Beautiful writing -- I love this.

I was going to quote my favorite lines, but there are too many of them!

["All illusions evaporated and left me alone in the instant of love. You never know where your path will cross the line and collide with infinity. When last thoughts stretch on the event horizon to the moment of forever, I hope I'll be thinking of you."]

& this

["So take these words and remember me by them. Even when I am gone, don't leave me standing here. Tell everyone I was still here now."]

yes, those are my Most Favorite!

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vaneramos July 18 2006, 18:46:29 UTC
Thank you. This morning was one of potent writing, evolving out of several weeks of potent feeling. It's as close as I've come so far to a personal credo.

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ink_ling July 18 2006, 18:27:09 UTC
This spirit -- given so knowingly, intimately, beautifully in image and word -- is thankfully, evidently, contagious. Thank you, Van.

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vaneramos July 18 2006, 18:47:24 UTC
Thank you, Jason. I thought about your comment yesterday, and hoped you would like this.

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