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Ten Kisses (5/5)

Mar 05, 2011 00:18

Title: Ten Kisses (5/5)
Author: vampmissedith
Rating: from G to PG-13
Pairing: House/Wilson
Warning: Mentions of canon Sam/Wilson and House/Cuddy and general season seven spoilers.
Summary: Ten unconnected first-kiss ficlets.
Notes: This is the final installment; I hope you enjoy!

( Kisses 9 and 10 )

fanfic, hilson, first time, g, pg, pg-13, slash, house/wilson, romance

Comments 13

damigella_314 March 5 2011, 14:58:27 UTC

I really, really loved "second nature". Because it highlights something which is in canon, namely the difference between how naturally House and Wilson understand each other and how everything with Cuddy has to be discussed and arranged.
And the image of House absentmindedly starting to give Wilson a back massage, and then noticing and... not stopping, with the physical tension between mounting line after line, was really amazing.

I am, on the other hand, afraid of fireworks, so I couldn't help being scared by the last story.

But mostly I want another ten!

vampmissedith March 8 2011, 21:02:22 UTC

I love fireworks. My dad's side of the family makes a huge deal out of it every year, lol. I'm sorry they scare you, though. I hope it was still somewhat enjoyable.

You caught the symbolism behind the massage, which I am glad of because you got the intended meaning. Contrasting Wilson and Cuddy is so much fun.

Thanks for reviewing!

chocolate_frapp March 5 2011, 16:11:41 UTC

these were all terrific! :)

vampmissedith March 8 2011, 21:05:38 UTC

Thanks for the review!

pgrabia March 5 2011, 17:07:31 UTC

Absolutely fabulous! Especially the last one--it was so incredibly descriptive that I could picture every second in my head and pictured two people so perfectly happy, relieved and themselves together. *mems*

vampmissedith March 8 2011, 21:10:33 UTC

I admit, I have personal experience with the fireworks, which may have accounted for the descriptiveness. Thanks for reviewing!

teamhilson March 6 2011, 06:41:13 UTC

These last two were absolutely lovely. I actually perfered the last kiss, mostly because I love Fourth of July Hilson stories. And, of course, fireworks.

vampmissedith March 9 2011, 04:05:47 UTC

My dad's side of the family makes a huge deal out of Fourth of July, so I totally get what you mean. Fireworks ftw.

Thanks for reviewing!

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vampmissedith March 9 2011, 04:07:05 UTC

Ha, yeah; they're like pieces to an amazing puzzle that click perfectly.

Thanks for reviewing!