Ten Kisses (2/5)

Mar 02, 2011 00:30

Title: Ten Kisses (2/5)
Author: vampmissedith
Rating: from G to PG-13
Pairing: House/Wilson
Warning: Mentions of canon Sam/Wilson and House/Cuddy and general season seven spoilers.
Summary: Ten unconnected first-kiss ficlets.
Notes: Thanks to dissonata for some last-minute betaing. The second drabble I literally wrote like an hour ago and he was ( Read more... )

fanfic, hilson, first time, g, pg, pg-13, slash, house/wilson, romance

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damigella_314 March 2 2011, 08:07:36 UTC
Thank you for starting my day with a smile!
I love the idea of House and Wilson playing silly childhood games, although the first one took me a minute to figure out (you can't really play that in a language where every word ends with a vowel).

I particularly loved the "You planned this" in the first (third) kiss, and ... well I liked all the second so much! House finally realizing that Cuddy isn't who he wants _and_ expressing this through a pancake metaphor was just too much. And Wilson sitting home all day with the pancakes ingredients and waiting. I can imagine him looking at his watch at, say, 4pm, thinking "may he will come later" and then thinking he was a fool. No wonder after a whole day of nervous no-I'm-not-waiting-who-should-I-be-waiting-for he jumped up a foot when House showed up :-).

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vampmissedith March 2 2011, 09:23:28 UTC
Ah, that makes sense about the animal game. We play it all the time. (By the way, urchin is an animal that begins with U.) Anyway, I've played it with food, movies . . . it's fun. I like it when House and Wilson act like kids. It makes me happy, so that was fun.

As for the pancakes, you totally hit the nail on the head. Poor Wilson. But at least House showed up. With metaphors and kisses. And since it was a metaphor, that means House showed up specifically with the intent of getting with Wilson. (And then pancakes.)

Thanks for reviewing!

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vampmissedith March 3 2011, 04:56:14 UTC
God I was craving pancakes all day yesterday as it was Pancake Day. I feel your pain.

I love it when Wilson is cofused. He manages to make it somehow . . . cute and fun to write.

Thanks for reviewing!

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teamhilson March 3 2011, 10:14:48 UTC
I was thinking back on this chapter, and realized that I didn't do a review. First of all, if what you said about IHOP is true, that is totally freaking awesome. I'm definitely going to remember that next year.

I loved both of these, though I think I like the first one little bit more, because the ending is SO perfect - the way you wove in Wilson realizing that House planned it all along. Freaking adorable.

And BTW I forgot to tell you when I reviewed chapter one that I loved that you got to add in some Twilight hate. I remember us talking about our mutual fustration with it.

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vampmissedith March 4 2011, 04:14:49 UTC
Well I would have definitely gone to IHOP if we had any in town. When I heard that it was Pancake Day, I had to write a fic about it. Which was perfect actually as I really only had nine and was hoping to get the tenth kiss soon.

I love it in fics and in the show when we find out one of them was being manipulative the whole time. That's always fun.

Hahahahaha yeah Twilight is so horrible, I couldn't help but insult it. Lol.

Thanks for the review!

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chocolate_frapp March 3 2011, 15:46:47 UTC
these are so sweet without being too cutesy. :)

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vampmissedith March 4 2011, 03:26:29 UTC
Thanks for reviewing!

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sara_tsuzuki March 4 2011, 01:24:20 UTC
Wonderful, Yay!!!

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vampmissedith March 4 2011, 04:15:28 UTC
I'm glad you liked; thanks for the review!

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