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Paper Faces on Parade (11/14)

Aug 07, 2010 00:34

Title: Paper Faces on Parade
Author: vampmissedith
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: some canon House/Cuddy and canon Wilson/Sam, but eventual House/Wilson slash.
Disclaimer: I do not own House.
Summary: As House and Wilson try to balance their strained friendship and life with their girlfriends, House treats a neo-Nazi he can't trust ( Read more... )

paper faces on parade, fanfic, hilson, pg-13, first time, slash, house/wilson

Comments 41

piepeloe August 7 2010, 07:29:07 UTC

I've been reading this since the beginning, and I rarely comment on fics, but this was a BRILLIANT plot twist. I totally didn't see it coming, yet it's still believable. I'm glad you decided to post.

As for the rest of the story: I hope this season turns out similar, with the couples realizing they're not going to work and House and Wilson realizing their set-up last season was pretty good.

Summary: great fic!

vampmissedith August 7 2010, 07:35:37 UTC

I love your icon, by the way. It's so true.

I'm glad you were surprised because that is the point of a twist and I worried I would fail spectacularly. Also, I'm pleased you think it makes sense . . . I've read stories where the twist literally came out of nowhere and I didn't want this to turn out that way.

Thank you for reviewing! (Even if this is your first, I understand. I try to review everything I read but . . . yeah, I'm not always so good about actually doing it . . .)

_slytherin_girl August 7 2010, 07:52:27 UTC

I think it took me about a full minute to realize what was going on. Good job! So rarely am I taken so by surprise. I'm really glad you decided to post this because I'm really enjoying it. :D

vampmissedith August 7 2010, 07:54:31 UTC

Well, I'm glad I managed to surprise you!

Thank you for reviewing.

slightlysatanic August 7 2010, 08:18:40 UTC

i'm drunk so it took me forever to figure this out but HOLY CRAP WHAT A TWIST!!

a+++++ for keeping us all in the dark like that.

vampmissedith August 7 2010, 08:20:04 UTC

That's okay that you were drunk. I've written a few stories drunk before, so no worries. I'm glad I caught you by surprise.

Thank you for reviewing!

glassyo August 7 2010, 08:59:59 UTC

Wow, I had to read that one part a few times because I thought I'd read it wrong (plus it's really late and I was trying to finish this chapter before going to bed).

I didn't see that little development coming at all.

I'm so glad you overcame your nervousness about posting the story because, as usual, it's awesome. :)

vampmissedith August 7 2010, 09:09:33 UTC

Hey there! How's IMDb? It got a little dramtic over there so . . . I had to take a break.

I'm actually pretty proud that it shocked you. I was hoping people would be surprised.

Thank you for reviewing!

glassyo August 7 2010, 17:06:15 UTC

The imdb board is...slow. It was already slowing down but now we're going like 7 hours without posts and that just makes me sad. It makes me do things like unlurk here. :P

Yeah, all the Huddy plugging wasn't going over well there. *sigh* and a couple of the more prolific posters don't come around much anymore. Maybe it'll pick up after the new season starts tho.

On the other hand, the Gleeeeeeeeeeeeee board is still poppin'! :)

vampmissedith August 8 2010, 03:56:21 UTC

IMDb, to me, just gets so . . . no offence, but juvenile. People freak out and get testy if you don't agree with everything they say . . . and it jsut seems like the same topics get discussed over and over, and whenever things are mature for too long a random troll shows up and ruins the fun.

Anyway, for your sake, I hope the boards pick up as well and I love Glee! That show is cool.

tanagramme August 7 2010, 09:15:23 UTC

I hadn't seen it coming at all, but when they kissed everything made sense (first thing I thought was "so that's why Thomas moved to New Jersey"). Although the description of the Jewish girl made me think of Wilson.
*claps hands*
Also, the whole kiss scene was beautiful, full of emotions, but not overly so. I feel really bad for Thomas now. But at the same time I really don't like him AT ALL.

Sorry I didn't comment sooner, because this whole fic is a great read: it's IC, I really like your take on Cuddy (& Rachel) and Sam regarding their relationships, and there's even an intriguing patient that brings a lot to the story (even before this chapter).

Thanks for sharing!

vampmissedith August 7 2010, 09:26:33 UTC

Actually, I did think the description of the Jewish girl was a bit too . . . obvious, hence the reason I put it in the same chapter as the kiss. Especially the bit about the homeless shelters, although I suppose it could've also been another parallel . . . Anyway, I'm really happy it surprised you because that's what I was aiming for.

How you feel about Thomas is up to you; I didn't write him to be either liked or disliked. A friend of mine thinks Thomas is a whiny, self-pitying ass and he has reason to think so; my mom thinks he's a pitiable character she feel sympathy towards. It all depends on the person reading, I think. I am also glad you thought he brought more to the story that surprise kissage. I also intended for him to parallel the lies Wilson and House were living with their girlfriends, and I'm glad you caught that.

Writing Sam, Cuddy, and Rachel was interesting and a challenge so I'm glad so many people, such as you, have noticed and taken time to comment on them.

Thank you for reviewing!