Paper Faces on Parade (5/14)

[vampmissedith]

Title: Paper Faces on Parade
Author: vampmissedith
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: some canon House/Cuddy and canon Wilson/Sam, but eventual House/Wilson slash.
Disclaimer: I do not own House.
Summary: As House and Wilson try to balance their strained friendship and life with their girlfriends, House treats a neo-Nazi he can't trust

Comments

[menolly_au]

I must admit I normally skim over any actual cases in fanfic but this one is interesting, as is Wilson's reaction to the patient. The little scene in the cafeteria (and House's thoughts on food stealing etc) was great as was the chase through the hospital - I guess if you work there you would get used to a certain amount of House based craziness in the corridors :) Yeah Cuddy - you just don't have a chance here, not with House discovering how much he likes to touch Wilson :)

[vampmissedith]

Would like to point out the error with the italics has been fixed.

I'm glad you don't skim over the case part . . . and I never will again because trust me, that part was HARD to write. Even with the research.

I didn't think it would be realistic for Wilson NOT to have a reaction so I'm glad you noticed it.

Also, yes, the chase scene was fun to write . . . but I think if you worked there long enough you would probably become immune to House's . . . weirdness. Lol, but it was fun anyway!

Thanks for reviewing!

[vampmissedith]

Would like to point out the wrror with the italics has been fixed.

Your'e very right--and I think the fact that House has put his efforts to gain his friendship back before his relationship with Cuddy is very telling. It shows what's really important.

In the show, more often than not the patient seems to be a parallel with House or at least his team, so I tried to do that as well and I'm glad you noticed.

Thank you for your review!

[stenveny]

A very well-paced and thoughtful piece of writing. House's simmering anger and Cuddy's guilt, the growing realization in both of them that they are caging each other with unrealistic expectations, and Wilson's deepening concern, all building to a very tense and compact climax. I'm looking forward to the next installment.

[vampmissedith]

Would like to point out the error with the italics has been fixed.

It's nice that you noticed that both Cuddy and House are realizing what's going on and that she feels guilty about it.

Thank you for reviewing!

[yarroway]

Loved the exchange at the end between House and Cuddy. Yes, its pretty clear that she isn't getting anything more from him than she already has.

[vampmissedith]

Would like to point out teh error with the italics has been fixed.

I'm glad you liked their little discussion, and you are so right about him not giving anything more than what he has . . . in more way than one, but I expect you knew that.

Thank you for reviewing!

[sara_tsuzuki]

I'm very intrigued for the nazi's case; love the House-Wilson's interaction, and how the *love*tension is building little by little between them. n_____________n

[vampmissedith]

Would like to point out the error with the italics is fixed.

I'm glad you think the Nazi case is intriguing because why else put it in the story? And the build-up is so much fun to write!

Thank you for reviewing!