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Paper Faces on Parade (3/14)

Jul 30, 2010 02:49

Title: Paper Faces on Parade
Author: vampmissedith
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: some canon House/Cuddy and canon Wilson/Sam, but eventual House/Wilson slash.
Disclaimer: I do not own House.
Summary: As House and Wilson try to balance their strained friendship and life with their girlfriends, House treats a neo-Nazi he can't trust ( Read more... )

paper faces on parade, fanfic, hilson, pg-13, first time, slash, house/wilson

Comments 20

yarroway July 31 2010, 09:44:18 UTC

First of all--great last line. Very IC, and perfectly placed ( ... )

vampmissedith August 1 2010, 04:50:55 UTC

I like Cuddy as a character and don't mind Sam, but I don't hate either of them; I just don't think they are right for House and Wilson.

I laughed when I wrote that line, too, so I'm glad you liked it.

You have very good insights (or at least, the same insights I used for this fic) about the characters.

Thank you for reviewing!

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vampmissedith August 1 2010, 05:57:54 UTC

THANK YOU for mentioning Cuddy's characterization because, although I think House is just fine and shouldn't change, I wanted people to try and see things from Cuddy's POV as well--and try to make it not evil. It's nice that someone cared enough to write most of the review about her and that it evoked the reaction I wanted.

I did like comparing and contrasting Sam with Cuddy, almost like foils to each other.

The last line made me laugh, too.

Thank you for your review!

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vampmissedith August 1 2010, 07:26:36 UTC

Writing Sam was difficult seeing as we haven't seen much of her on the show, but I did as much as I could with what we've been given on the show. I hope you are happy with the result.

I agree with you entirely about House and Cuddy and Wilson. Thank you for responding!

_slytherin_girl August 6 2010, 08:10:04 UTC

So I just started reading this tonight, and alas, have to sleep so can't continue reading right now, but I just wanted to say that I'm really enjoying this. Your characterization is spot on. I did notice a couple of typos (there's a g missing on 'anything' and another word. If I recall it says rock, but I think you meant rack? I should've written them down, but went to read the next chapter instead, sorry.)

Also, when I read what the son had tattoed on his knuckles, all I could think of was this. :D

vampmissedith August 6 2010, 08:58:20 UTC

Yes, I occasionally have typos, but really . . . not that big of a deal.

I'm glad you enjoy the characterizations and as for the tattoo . . . alas, no, he is not a fan of Rockwell the band . . . although that would be cool. George Lincoln Rockwell is a rather famous neo-Nazi.

Sorry for keeping you awake and I hope you sleep well!

Thank you for reviewing.