Haunting (Part 5)

[vampiremadonna]

Title: Haunting
Author: VampireMadonna
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: PG-13
Length: Undetermined
Summary: A tragic end leads to a new beginning...

Comments

[trish3815]

Poor Jae... he doesn't want to leave Yunho because he loves him but this is his last chance to be with him... Yunho finally realizes he loves Jae as well... what will happen now if Jae has to leave...

[riseofnoona]

nonononono leave the last 2 lines alone, it's good enough where it is!

I feel my poor little fangirl heart breaking more and more as the end is coming...T_T

[trieze0713]

Kept saying it's heartbreaking over and over again... but can't find a better for it :( Oh Jae...

[crimson_miharu]

Your lil poem...don't tell me your gonna kill Yunho! Haven't you killed enough!?!? I'm gonna have to put u timeout on killing characters after this story!

[vampiremadonna]

I'm putting myself on a timeout! All of these negative emotions are wearing me down. ><'

[monoxide92]

That poem at the end gives me a bad feeling... especially the last line. Poor Jae, poor Yunho... Why do I have a bad feeling about where this is going