Fate (Mirotic) Jaejoong's POV: Part 5

[vampiremadonna]

Title: Fate (Mirotic) Jaejoong's POV: Part 5
Author: VampireMadonna
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Synopsis: Jaejoong's life is...complicated. Still, he loves everything about it. But one day, he meets someone who throws a wrench in the wheels and makes his complicated life even more complex.

Comments

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[mcarol85]

Beautiful smut. That's an adjective i've yet to put with with that word. :) But that's what it was, excellently sexy and touching at the same time. 3 months and final performance? I'm guessing it's final performance for this err.. stage/tour/event. I liked the tidbits about fans shipping Jae and Jin hahaha. You have this story line that you're following, but you don't forget to add in the little things to make the storyline seem so much fuller :)

[shimchangmint]

It was the climax to end all climaxes. As his hips continued to plunge, automatically now, Yunho thought his life was literally flowing into Jae as the orgasm seemed neverending and he felt his strength waning. He had never had such a strong, bountiful climax before. Only Jae could draw such a reaction from him, he was sure. No one else had ever affected him like that.

^ that part literally had my face heating up into a blush. Hnnng their copulations are so intimate and passionate. ♥
And I am a bloody pervert orz

[umemarie]

This is so great. The smut is so *blush*. I love the intimacy.