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Fatal Attraction (Epilogue)

Oct 30, 2011 00:48

Title: Fatal Attraction
Author: VampireMadonna
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Length: Two-shot
Summary: Jaejoong is an assassin: Yunho, his target. But what happens when the hunter falls for his charming prey?
N/B: Inspired by, but not based on, the character of YeoWoon from Warrior: Baek Dong Soo.

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action, yunho, jaejoong, two shot, nc-17, violence, smut, yunjae, completed, fatal attraction

Comments 42

. onewaytrackk October 30 2011, 04:53:24 UTC

Spot!

Re: . onewaytrackk October 30 2011, 05:00:52 UTC

<3
Perfect ending for a perfect story :D.

yunho1205 October 30 2011, 05:02:09 UTC

SPOTTTTTT!! Even though I'm scared of the outcome of this . . . I'm still spotting!! :(((

rainycakes October 30 2011, 16:46:02 UTC

Omo~ *crying* It's like straight out of a movie! And I may not be as mad at you as I said I might be from the last part's comment, but I'm still a little upset that Jae will always have to worry about someone coming for him. D: Wae he can't live normal life? :(

But YunJae is together and that's all that matters! <33 Hopefully they will have a long and loving life together filled with many, MANY smuttilicious moments before someone comes to kill Jae and maybe even Yunho, too, still. DX Ugh, I can't just let that go...

I am, however, rightfully satisfied that you've written some smutties for us, seeing as how you are adamant about denying us any in-between smutties in Second Chances. :( *this is me, pointedly staring at you sadly and POINTEDLY* lol Actually, I'm not so bent out of shape about the non-smut chapters as I am about you torturing us with the Hana bs right in the middle of them. Forever boo~

LoL okay, I think I'm done bitching unnecessarily! ^_~ This was awesome! I look forward to more~ :D

li_fao October 30 2011, 06:44:01 UTC

It's beautiful, I love it till the end. ^_^
And you right bout Yeowoon, I kind of hope someone write Dong SooxYoewoon pairing, their conversation in the jail if you notice, it was like a promise to a lover,Dong Soo believed in Yoewoon,willing to wait for him, gah... it's just my imagination.

kattan69 October 30 2011, 07:24:51 UTC

At least Jae's father gave him a chance to be alive...even in the expense of killing the other clan members. Now he can be with Yunho and hopefully live their lives to the fullest.

yayauw October 30 2011, 09:07:14 UTC

aaah..I love the fic.kinda different with you've written so far even though it reminds me of forgiven sometimes.
thank you for making this fic.I didnt realized that it has another chapter and an epilogue until I checked your LJ directly.
Jaejoong really has this outer appearance that make it easy to imagine him as the assasin. and yunho my boy...you are lucky to meet a kind hearted assasin who spared your life on his own account. Im glad that they back together as I couldnt imagine how you will end this stoty after reading the part two. I thought you will just end the story like that as I couldnt figure out how yunjae will handle this matter.Glad that I was wrong.
again, thanks dear