Fate (Mirotic): Part 1/3

[vampiremadonna]

Title: Fate (Mirotic)  Part 1/3
Author: VampireMadonna
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: NC-17
Synopsis: Yunho's life is empty, there's nothing much that gives him real joy. One fateful night he runs into the most beautiful girl he's ever seen...Except she's not a girl. He's immediately captivated by the boy. Could this be the start of something new?
A/N: It's

Comments

[hang_la]

Your writing is beautiful! :)

[yunho1205]

GDI!! You weren't kidding when you said I'd have a hard time pulling myself away from this!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!! What to do, what to do???

I just love the way you describe Jae in this!! His eyes, his lips, his hair, his skin, his collar bones!! Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! He's so fuckin awesome!! And I love his honest character!

Ok, I have 13 minutes before SATC 2 starts!! I'll see if I can pull myself away from part two of this fic!!! Wish me luck!!! ♥♥♥

[yunajelove721]

Wow your Jae is so unique. It's Reeny btw. Kekeke... *keeps reading*

[ialways_am]

this is so good ^^ *noms on cookies whilst reading*

Jae is beautifuuuul *^* and yunho can't resist him keke :D

<3

[mcarol85]

Intriguing. I'm actually pretty sure I've read this one before, but I must have been a silent reader back then when i didn't have an LJ account.
But I do remember enjoying the story, so I decided to read it again while leaving comments ;)
The beginning made me wonder if this was going to be a bandfic, but it became obvious enough that it wasn't.
The jadedness of the now-highprofile celebrity was portrayed realistically.
I really like the concept of the hooded dancers, and wish I could get a visual on that, but if we could project our imagination on a screen for viewing... well that'd be interesting wouldn't it.
Thanks for writing this, I'm enjoying the flawless language you use and the unique plotline you weave.