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Second Chances (Chapter 21)

Jul 08, 2011 01:50

Title: Second Chances
Author: VampireMadonna
Pairing: Main: YunJae; Secondary: JaeMin, HoMin
Rating: NC 17 (This chapter)
Length: Chaptered
Summary: After Changmin's death, how are Jae and Yunho going to cope with their grief and their increasing attraction to each other
A/N: This is a filler chapter. Since you guys whined about the " ( Read more... )

charater death, homin, yunho, jaejoong, nc-17, smut, second chances, chaptered, yunjae, humor, jaemin

Comments 37

vampiremadonna July 8 2011, 05:56:55 UTC

For the pervert twins!

yunho1205 July 8 2011, 06:03:24 UTC

Eeeeeeeeeeeee!! I was just about to spot!!!!!! YAY!!! ♥♥♥

yunho1205 July 8 2011, 06:46:49 UTC

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! So now I know what you meant about the smut not being what I had expected!! LOL!!! Dude, I literally had to read the first few paragraph again cuz I was so damned confused!! LMAO!! I was like, "WTF? Yunho's sucking on a nipple that's 'atop a solid C-cup?' This has to be a typo! I gotta tell Vampy about this STAT!" LOL!!

Hehehehehe!! Awww, poor Jae!! But I can sooooooooooo relate!! Believe me, ever since I discovered the wonderful word of Yunjae and fanfics, I've had some pretty fucked up dreams myself!! LOL!! Waking up to see if I still had all my girlie parts!! But unlike Jae being happy at finding his parts still intact, I was sad that I had mine and that it was only a dream!!! No bits and pieces for me! No egg roll and rice balls for anyone to feast on on this body! Boooooooooooooooooo!! BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA ( ... )

rainycakes July 8 2011, 18:42:40 UTC

FUCKING FUCK! O_O Jae makes me want to be a boy soooo fucking badly! I always wanted to be before, but now he makes what I am sound so much fucking more sub par it's fucking ridiculous. T__T Waaahh...

Even though all of that is true...both parts of the smut were HOTT~ Oh shit the het smut still got me where I needed to be! kekeke All I have to do is imagine Jae as Yun and me as Jae and I'm all set to go! :P I know I'm Jae biased in all things and all, buuuuut imagining Yunho fucking me wasn't too difficult either! tehehe~ I'm so naughty~ YOU'RE so damn naughty! Holy rice balls! Omg using Sara's reference of rice balls makes Jae's rice balls pretty damn Holy to me! kekeke OMG ok, I'm done now!

BAHAHA I ♥ you JJ bestie~ Egg roll and rice balls ftw! xD

And dude, sorry it took me all this time to post this. I sorta kinda maybe drank a little too much last night and it got...interesting. O.o hehehe xP Anywho, lovely smut is THE SEX lovely~ ♥

Pervert #2 ouuuutttt~

chloe1910 July 8 2011, 06:23:04 UTC

LOl, that was an interesting dream Jae had. I do agree that it's scary and hot at the same time.

They are both really like horny rabbits. But I aint complaining. You have a nice weekend too ^^

kattan69 July 8 2011, 07:02:06 UTC

Yunho is always lucky to be able to sex up with Jae...not fair.

lovelysasusaku July 8 2011, 07:19:33 UTC

The beginning shocked me but now I am laughing at it. :D

good weekend as well <3

yayauw July 8 2011, 08:54:27 UTC

i havent read the story but only read your comment (still at work)...Actually, I prefer to have a fluff chapter than smut.too bad that I forgot to leave comment on the previous chapter. huhuhuhu....could you please give me a very romantic chapter????thnk youuuuuuu

vampiremadonna July 8 2011, 14:53:35 UTC

Sorry! Fluff just isn't my thing. THIS is fluffy for me, compared to my usual emotionally charged chapters but the next chapter (which was supposed to be this week's) will be sorta light so maybe you'll enjoy that more. Just gotta wait a week is all!