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vampiremadonna

Forbidden: Part 12

May 20, 2011 19:27

Title: Forbidden
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: PG-13
Length: Part 12/13
Summary: Jae is concerned about the attention his sister is receiving from a dangerous man but he isn't in any position to take care of it himself so he turns to the king. However, the King, Jung Yunho, presents unforeseen ( Read more... )

yunho, jaejoong, pg-13, historical, chaptered, yunjae, forbidden, romance

Comments 14

crimson_miharu May 20 2011, 23:29:19 UTC

MINES!

crimson_miharu May 21 2011, 01:06:05 UTC

:O I was so hoping heads would roll! But by dammit the way you described everything I could envision it. The guards ready with their swords, ready for Yunho to give them the signal to execute the men for their crimes! The Ministers must've been scared shitless! I gotta say Yunho handled that really well...off to part 2!

yunho_ism May 20 2011, 23:35:32 UTC

spot!

yunho_ism May 21 2011, 01:02:37 UTC

omg. yunho. i'm so proud of you too.
;_________________________;
i hope those men indeed change for the better.
/off to the next chap.

yunho1205 May 20 2011, 23:53:22 UTC

SPOT!!!

yunho1205 May 21 2011, 05:25:17 UTC

AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!! THAT. WAS. FREAKING. AWESOME!!!!!!!! Holy moly!!! How did you do that???? DAMN!! Just when I thought that I loved Jae the most in this fic, you completely made me LOVE the hell out of Yunho!! LOL!! Woah!! I can't believe you were stressing about Yunho's speech!! Psh! "i'm going to half ass it and tell everyone to forgive my laziness" Half ass?? Are you kidding me?? It was perfect!! :))))

Awwww, but I do feel bad for Minister Lee's wife, poor woman. Ugh! That bastard!!

I was actually super surprised that Yunho burned that list! I was like, "Boooooooo!! I wanted more blood!" Hehehehehe!! But yes, Yunho is too good a king not to give second chances! *sigh*

Geez!! I can't get over how awesomely you wrote this!! seriously, I could see it all in my head!! I was even sayin Yunho's lines out loud!! Like I was a regal, handsome king!! Hehehehehehe!!

Okey dokey!! Off to the next part!! ♥♥♥

rainycakes May 21 2011, 16:48:02 UTC

DAMN! I was hoping some of them would be killed!! Ah, well...I suppose King Yunho is a better man than me~ LOL

Giving some of them a second chance seems too risky to me. They were so easily swayed before, what makes Yun think they won't be again? Let's just hope his words have the desired effect.

On to part B!

riseofnoona May 21 2011, 08:50:39 UTC

just a word before reading part B : YUNHO MARRY ME AND MAKE ME BABIES AND THEN BRING JAE WITH YOU AND LET ME FILM YOUR SEXYNESS

jae000 May 21 2011, 20:08:08 UTC

Yunho is THE king!!!keke
Off to next part :)