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vampiremadonna

Forbidden: Part 9

May 10, 2011 15:02

Title: Forbidden
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: PG-13
Length: Part 9/? (It's a LONG short story)
Summary: Jae is concerned about the attention his sister is receiving from a dangerous man but he isn't in any position to take care of it himself so he turns to the king. However, the King, Jung Yunho, presents ( Read more... )

yunho, jaejoong, pg-13, historical, chaptered, yunjae, forbidden, romance

Comments 29

yunho1205 May 10 2011, 20:33:19 UTC

AAAAAAHHHHHHH!!! SPOT!!!

yunho1205 May 10 2011, 21:40:33 UTC

Damn. I'm so sad right now. I think I started tearing up when JiHye was thinking about how Jae and her husband were gonna be confused as to why she aould so this. I just kept thinking, "Oh no, this is gonna crush Jae!!" Waaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!! *sigh*

Ok, I gotta tell you, I loved the 3rd, 4th, and 5th sentences of this chap!! :)) "Jae shot him a baleful glare over his shoulder and his smile widened. Only Jae would dare look at him that way. He loved it." Eeeeeeeeeee!! LOL!! And Yunho LOVES it!!! He loves how Jae's getting to a point where he's not holding back in front of Yun!! Awwwww ( ... )

vampiremadonna May 10 2011, 21:43:49 UTC

There there... *feeds you YunJae smut cookie*

rainycakes May 10 2011, 22:07:28 UTC

OMO! JiHye~ Jaejoong~ Waaaaahhhh ( ... )

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crimson_miharu May 10 2011, 20:42:39 UTC

SPOT!

crimson_miharu May 11 2011, 04:00:26 UTC

I knew it! I knew that damn Minister was gonna rape her! Jae is gonna go ape shit on him I can feel it...I would say Yunho will help him keep his cool but Yunho and TaeHyun will follow JAe and kill the Minister and then all hell will break loose >.<.

Ok...back to being a rational reader. Poor JiHye what is suppose to be the most special and amazing night of her life ended like this and OMG poor TaeHyun cause now he is left wondering did she really not want him. That's what it would look from his or any other vantage point...rather than make love to her husband, she tried to kill herself....

winter_subaki May 10 2011, 23:17:30 UTC

Ican't believe this..THAT BASTARD!!!! HE RAPED JIHYE? God....

yunho_ism May 11 2011, 00:18:32 UTC

this fic is already ending? i am badly going to miss it. ;_________;
poor jihye! so that bastard raped her?! it must have been so hard for her to carry all that burden.
and it was her wedding day. it should have been a very happy moment. :(
it's really nice to see that jae's almost completely open with yunho now.
i hope yunho would be able to comfort him through this difficult time. thank you for the update, dear. it's wonderful as always.^^

vampiremadonna May 11 2011, 00:36:30 UTC

It was only supposed to be 5 parts remember? A long short story as I put it, so it ran longer than I intended anyway. I'll be sad to say goodbye too but I don't want to drag it on unnecessarily. I hate fics that are like half storyline content and half filler. At least it's ending before people get bored with it, I hope >_

yunho_ism May 11 2011, 08:09:40 UTC

errr... i think i write like that. OTL
but anywayz, i mem'd this fic already so i can read it over and over again. haha.^^

uchihacarol May 11 2011, 01:06:13 UTC

poor JiHye >.<
she trying to protect jae... but doing it would just make him worry more x.x
good things that nothing really bad happened ....
but jae fainted now ^^"

waiting more as soon as u can :)