Forbidden: Part 4b

[vampiremadonna]

Title: Forbidden
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: PG-R (this chapter)
Length: Part 4/? (It's a LONG short story)
Summary: Jae is concerned about the attention his sister is receiving from a dangerous man but he isn't in any position to take care of it himself so he turns to the king. However, the King, Jung Yunho, presents unforeseen complications...

Comments

[yunho1205]

Hehehehe!!! SPOT!!!

[rainycakes]

Wow. So they finally had a rated encounter. I'm sure it was quite the eye-opener for our little JaeJae. hehehe

[yunho1205]

OMG!!! I'm the worst reader in the world!!! :(((( I'm so sorry it took me so long to comment. :(((

And another OMG for not catching the extended part at the end of part 4a!! LOL!! I read this part then Jess was like, "Oh, what did you think about the guards eating and relaxing with Yunho and Jae?" And I was like, "What? When?" LOL!! So I went back and read that extra part and YAY! Jae's sister has been promised to that her little crush!!, and I really liked it!! :))) I loved how cute Jae was with Yun, letting his personallity shine through, pouting and stuff!! Eeeeee!! So cute

[uw1m4]

second....

[uw1m4]

ok... i just read this briefly (can't help myself...) but Wow!... hehe...
the way the confusion of the two of what had happened... huummm I hope you tell us in the next part of what had been done to Yunho and by who...

[yukimiya87]

King Yunho finally gave in! :D
Ah but both are pretty much confused now.
Can't wait for the next part.
Thanks for updating!

[yunho_ism]

OMG! DYING HERE!!! SUCH A CLIFFHANGER!
finally... some real yunjae action.
but yeah. they're both awfully bothered by it.
you liked it jae! you liked it! just accept that fact! LOL.
and i wonder what happened to yun in the past.
really inlove with this fic and with second chances.
please update soon. :DDD