I've never had a livejournal account before, but I pretty much just made one so I could comment on your beautiful story! This is one of the best fanfics I have EVER read. It's so beautiful (not to mention hot)! :P
"...two peach colored candles gave off a soft glow that caressed both of their faces." "His Mako eyes scorned with torment, darkened by thoughts of evil and death." You are gifted at writing! I could see everything, every little detail perfectly in my mind.
Thanks for writing this incredible fanfic and sharing it with us! :) I really, really hope you continue with the story!
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"...two peach colored candles gave off a soft glow that caressed both of their faces." "His Mako eyes scorned with torment, darkened by thoughts of evil and death." You are gifted at writing! I could see everything, every little detail perfectly in my mind.
Thanks for writing this incredible fanfic and sharing it with us! :) I really, really hope you continue with the story!
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