Nice first outing, what happens next?roselongbowMarch 18 2013, 12:20:14 UTC
I like! Oh and thanks for adding me as a friend, I'll add you back in a minute.
I noticed a couple of grammatical errors, like missing question marks but other than that I really liked this opening chapter and can't wait to see what happens next.
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I noticed a couple of grammatical errors, like missing question marks but other than that I really liked this opening chapter and can't wait to see what happens next.
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