Title: Ain´t no sense in love
Pairing/Characters: Luke/Reid, Katie, Casey, Lily, Holden
Word count: ∼18000
Rating: R
Warnings: language, brief Reid/OMC, sorta brief Luke/OMC, generall OOC-ness
Summary: Reid and Luke are 18 years old and best friends, though their families and friends seem to think that there is more to them than meets the eye, which in
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I adored the way you wrote Lily's character, and could instantly picture her in my mind's eye, along with her embarrassment at trying to give Luke and Reid 'the talk'.
This line was just great, exactly the kind of thing Reid would have said - “Wow, 10 points to Gryffindor!" Reid said mockingly. “Yes, I am gay, Katie.” And then Katie's delight at having a gay best friend ... ! Especially the bit with them watching Baywatch.
You were spot on when you said that Casey wasn't 'the sharpest tool in the box' (no shit!) but then made him be the sweet creature we all know and love ... and actually, pretty perceptive. His Lily fantasy though? Ewwwww.
I also loved this bit - “So basically you think Reid´s dream guy is some lame-ass dude who likes to cook, reads textbooks and plays chess?” (that sounds about right!!!)
Just brilliant!
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But I have to tell you again: Your story is simply too adorable.
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