I'm in love with this story already, just so you know. Clueless!Luke is adorable. Young!Reid and Young!Luke--what a combination! :)
Their first meeting where Reid doesn't want to play with Luke yet Luke doesn't give up is so them. Wonderful introduction. Oh, and thanks for featuring Lily so much. I like when she's cool and not hateful towards Reid. Katie and the guys as friends is also charming.
Favorite lines:
"So basically you think Reid´s dream guy is some lame-ass dude who likes to cook, reads textbooks and plays chess?” LOL!
“Did she walk around in her underwear?” Casey asked and perked up, because mom or not, there was no denying that Mrs. Snyder was hot. Love it!
The only poster Reid did have was one with the periodic table and that was just depressing. Aww, Reid.
" Well of course you girls should stick together on this one." Reid is so snarky to Luke. This is so sweet, and Lily is actually a nice person here. Can't wait for more."
You're off to a great start! Love the tennis references and also the terrible time Luke and Casey have with the list, while Reid and Katie knock theirs off in no time! And Casey's POV is a hoot!
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Their first meeting where Reid doesn't want to play with Luke yet Luke doesn't give up is so them. Wonderful introduction. Oh, and thanks for featuring Lily so much. I like when she's cool and not hateful towards Reid. Katie and the guys as friends is also charming.
Favorite lines:
"So basically you think Reid´s dream guy is some lame-ass dude who likes to cook, reads textbooks and plays chess?” LOL!
“Did she walk around in her underwear?” Casey asked and perked up, because mom or not, there was no denying that Mrs. Snyder was hot. Love it!
The only poster Reid did have was one with the periodic table and that was just depressing.
Aww, Reid.
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loved ur luke/reid as kids he is so beautiful,liked that lily loved reid in this fic
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