Amazing story! Guh, I am completely in love with it, I am.
The boys finally realized what they wanted . . . each other! And it was beautiful and right and perfect.
He would expect Reid to be this loving, considerate boyfriend who held his hand and told him how pretty he was every day, and Reid wasn’t sure he could do that. Not even for Luke. Ha ha, so Reid. But he so would!
Katie and Reid's drinking session--awesome. Glad she's there for him.
The first kiss--beautiful!
And the not-technically-sex scene was just right for them. They didn't push it but of course they will have the sex and it'll be fabulous because it's them; it's Luke and Reid.
Loved the declarations--how they already knew so it was easy to say it once it came down to admitting it.
I've read a few young!Reid or young!Luke fics (and they're enjoyable) but yours really got them right. Perfectly. Just wish this was longer--I want to see them in Boston together.
Lovely, lovely story. Thanks for sharing! Really, thanks.
Thank you for your long and thoughtful comments. I really apprechiate when ppl take their time to express how they feel about something they read. I was kinda bad at commenting before but when I started writing myself I realized how much you apprechiate it so I´ve tried to be better at it.
I´m so glad this worked for you. It was kinda hard to write, mostly since I hadn´t written anything in ages and I had proplems with the whole OOC-ness. I couldn´t have the proper age difference between them since it wouldn´t fit the story and I was a bit weary if that would make it way to unlike the Reid we all know and love.
I do however LOVE high school AU´s and thought it would be interesting to picture Reid and Luke as just friends. Even if everyone except themselves knew they were totally in love with each other. I mean, how could they not be? :)
Awww!! This was amazing! Definitely needed that! I loved the friendships; Casey and Katie were awesome. So glad our boys ended up together and happy! You're getting an extra hug for this in Birmingham <333
Coming of Age, and realizing where they stood in life.joann414October 4 2011, 16:20:09 UTC
This was an awesome fic, and I am so glad you chose to write them at an early age, but old enought to know what love is. The art is beautiful,and I am so glad that Bhumi encouraged you and got you back into writing. Your talent is wasted if you don't use it, and writing is definitely one of your many talents, I am sure. Thank you for a great story of our guys.
Re: Coming of Age, and realizing where they stood in life.vallie82October 14 2011, 23:21:01 UTC
Thank you so much for your lovely comment! Since english isn´t my first language and I find it really hard to write some times I really apprechiated it!
I love High school stories. It´s something so sweet and fun about picturing the boys at an early age. And thinking of Reid as a little boy just melts my heart! )
I loved that everybody seemed to know that Luke and Reid belong together while they needed a little longer to figure it out!. Also loved their friendship with Katie and Casey.
Brilliant story!!!!!!!! Downloaded the pdf right after I finished reading it!!! :)
Thank you! I´m glad you´ve enjoyed it! And thank you again for the lovely banner I have so much love for it and so many ppl have told me how awesome it is! :)
what can i say for this chapter is so epic the first kiss was so awesome ,luke say ilu to reid just wow love how luke was so eager to makelove with reid,cannot express to u how i adored that reid wants to be a bottom for luke for thier first time very big thanks for that fic it is so wonderful
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The boys finally realized what they wanted . . . each other! And it was beautiful and right and perfect.
He would expect Reid to be this loving, considerate boyfriend who held his hand and told him how pretty he was every day, and Reid wasn’t sure he could do that. Not even for Luke.
Ha ha, so Reid. But he so would!
Katie and Reid's drinking session--awesome. Glad she's there for him.
The first kiss--beautiful!
And the not-technically-sex scene was just right for them. They didn't push it but of course they will have the sex and it'll be fabulous because it's them; it's Luke and Reid.
Loved the declarations--how they already knew so it was easy to say it once it came down to admitting it.
I've read a few young!Reid or young!Luke fics (and they're enjoyable) but yours really got them right. Perfectly. Just wish this was longer--I want to see them in Boston together.
Lovely, lovely story. Thanks for sharing! Really, thanks.
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I´m so glad this worked for you. It was kinda hard to write, mostly since I hadn´t written anything in ages and I had proplems with the whole OOC-ness. I couldn´t have the proper age difference between them since it wouldn´t fit the story and I was a bit weary if that would make it way to unlike the Reid we all know and love.
I do however LOVE high school AU´s and thought it would be interesting to picture Reid and Luke as just friends. Even if everyone except themselves knew they were totally in love with each other. I mean, how could they not be? :)
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So glad our boys ended up together and happy! You're getting an extra hug for this in Birmingham <333
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And I cant wait for that hug! Only 13 days left!! jslkfjsdhfsdjkfsdh
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The art is beautiful,and I am so glad that Bhumi encouraged you and got you back into writing. Your talent is wasted if you don't use it, and writing is definitely one of your many talents, I am sure. Thank you for a great story of our guys.
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I love High school stories. It´s something so sweet and fun about picturing the boys at an early age. And thinking of Reid as a little boy just melts my heart! )
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Brilliant story!!!!!!!! Downloaded the pdf right after I finished reading it!!! :)
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the first kiss was so awesome ,luke say ilu to reid just wow
love how luke was so eager to makelove with reid,cannot express to u how i adored that reid wants to be a bottom for luke for thier first time
very big thanks for that fic it is so wonderful
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