Title: 'cause the chains I been hearing now for most of my life
Characters/Pairings: Daniel, Charlotte, Richard, Juliet, Ben, Eloise, ensemble. (Dan/Charlotte)
Summary: "Whatever happened, happened isn't worth anything anymore." Daniel goes to desperate lengths to save Charlotte.
Rating: PG
Word Count: 5,140
Warning: Child abduction.
Spoilers: Up to end
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So yeah, this is definitely going into my memories!
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Yes, that totally makes sense -- in fact, that's kind of the crux of what I was going for; that it can be free will AND fate, rather than simply free will vs. fate. And of course Juliet would know, while all the men remain totally clueless, lol.
Woah, what a compliment -- thanks again so, so much for taking the time to read and offer such lovely thoughts!
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I'm really, really pleased to hear that the narrative jumping around wasn't completely impossible to follow -- elliotsmelliot's advice from thequillstation actually came in super-handy, in terms of providing references and touchstones in each section. And yay Richard, for sure! It's intimidating to write, but I loved doing a little of his perspective.
Thanks again for the wonderful feedback!
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And yay -- happy I was able to throw you for a bit of a loop. ;P I'm still not convinced Dan deserves a happy ending per se, but I'm still glad my muse decided to give him one.
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