Weighs On Me

May 04, 2009 20:13


Title: Weighs On Me
Characters/Pairings: Eloise, Daniel/Charlotte, Desmond/Penny
Summary: Sometimes even the worst mistakes can be undone.
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Up to 5x14.
A/N: Prompted by 'The Variable'. Title and lyrics from 'It Weighs On Me' by Royal Wood.

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pairing: desmond/penny, story: fic, pairing: daniel/charlotte, character: eloise hawking, character: penny, character: desmond

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jenthegypsy May 5 2009, 01:54:53 UTC
You are far and away my favorite new Lost writer. This piece is flawless ~ and heartbreaking.

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valhalla37 May 5 2009, 15:03:32 UTC
Ack, WOW! What a compliment! Thank you so much! (And many more exclamation marks, haha.)

This was actually attempt number seven or eight to write something right after 'The Variable' and nothing was really working out -- so I'm really happy to hear you think it came together in the end.

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ohioala19 May 5 2009, 03:58:54 UTC
this was beautiful, i absolutely loved reading it i think those are my two favorite couples

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valhalla37 May 5 2009, 15:04:20 UTC
Thank you! :D

They are absolutely my two favourites as well, and the family connection makes them all the more awesome.

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roseys_fics May 5 2009, 19:57:29 UTC
This is gorgeous. Really, really lovely. I simply love your lost fics, and this is just awesome because it combines my two favourite pairings on lost. :)

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valhalla37 May 6 2009, 11:22:55 UTC
Thank you so much! I actually saw just saw your latest chapter of 'Storm' on ff.net, and was going to comment on how much I liked it before my computer went all screwy, but I'll be sure to do that later today!

Thanks again! :)

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ext_174810 May 6 2009, 00:48:51 UTC
Aw, that was so sweet and touching! I so wished it was real!

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valhalla37 May 6 2009, 11:23:40 UTC
Thank you! :D

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killtheselights May 6 2009, 01:23:57 UTC
You've done it again, naturally.
You have by far been the best writer invade Eloise's mind, and not only did you give Charlotte and Dan's daughter my favorite name, you also referenced my hometown.
And our icons match.

Friending you now. :)

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valhalla37 May 6 2009, 11:25:53 UTC
Awww, thank you so much! I'm very, very flattered ... I don't know why Eloise speaks to me so much, but it's the first time I've really found myself inspired to write from a "villain's" perspective.

I *heart* that icon so much. That whole batch was just incredible.

Oh, and I will definitely friend you back! :D

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