Five drabbles from the lostsquee Drabble Challenge
Title (Prompt): Rhythm
Characters/Pairings: Daniel/Charlotte
Rating: PG
A/N: Originally posted here.
( The rhythm of her breathing is almost enough to soothe him to sleep )
Characters/Pairings: Daniel/Charlotte
Rating: PG
A/N: Originally posted here.
( The rhythm of her breathing is almost enough to soothe him to sleep )
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Its just ....umm... no offence...but that last one is sort of a bit too similar to that one you wrote about Juliet and Charlotte at christmas time, smooching behind Jack and Dan's back (That was your fic right?) Just seemed like a different location with Sawyer instead of Juliet. Just thought i'd call you out ;) lol XXX, I might be completely wrong but thats how it felt whilst I was reading it.
However that aside beautiful imagery as always especially in "Natives" XXX
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I can definitely see where you saw the similarities between the two, though I was trying to say something different in each one even though the circumstances are comparable, but I absolutely appreciate the feedback, especially because sometimes I feel like I'm repeating myself. ;)
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