Leap of Faith

[valhalla37]

Title: Leap of Faith
Characters/Pairings: Daniel, Charlotte (slight hint of Dan/Charlotte)
Rating: PG
Summary: Arriving on the island requires something more than expected.
Spoilers: Up to 4x02
Disclaimer: Not mine.
A/N: Co-winner of third place for lost_in_108's Challenge #2: Science Vs. Faith. Originally posted here.

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Comments

[franza]

Cute, Short and sweet. Nice one.
Gawd i love storms and helicopters.

Mainly because I love that helicopter scene. Dan and Charlotte freaking out, all like "arghhhhhh, nooo!!" and "where's my vest argghhh!!" hahahaha and poor Miles sorting it out in a characteristically abrupt manner, lol.

[valhalla37]

Thank you so much!

I know -- this is like my, third or fourth time writing a helicopter scene. I don't know why, but I love it so much. And you're right; fantastic canon scene too!

[fifmeister]

Oh, I love this, all the in-characterness you pack into those few short paragraphs. Charlotte encouraging Daniel and Daniel considering probabilities and velocity are especially great; so true to the characters. I actually can barely even remember the "jumping out of the helicopter" incident in canon--guess I need to pull out my season four DVDs again! ;)

[valhalla37]

Thank you so, so much! I used to hate drabbling until I really forced myself to change the way I wrote them and not trying to push a full-length fic-type mindset onto a small piece. Now I enjoy it, but I'm never sure if it works or not. So thanks so much for the great feedback! :D

[valhalla37]

Awww, thank you so much! :D I try not to ever gauge potential reaction when I enter challenges like this, but I honestly was completely surprised by it! Always nice to see some love for Dan/Charlotte fic, though. ;P