FIC: In a Mirror, Darkly: Chapter 15/?

[valeriev84]

Title: In a Mirror, Darkly: Chapter 15
Author: Valerie Vancollie (valeriev84 [at] hotmail.com)
Characters: Don, Charlie, Alan, David, Colby, Nikki, (surprise)
Pairings: brief canon mentions of Charlie/Amita & Don/Robin
Rating: 15
Summary: There was a certain irony to the situation, that the brother who was a federal agent had been abducted to be

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[valeriev84]

There you go, the second part of the revelation scene, I hope you liked it. This chapter almost didn't get posted due to internet problems, but they seem to be under control now.

This chapter wraps up Part IV and the Alan pov, next we move on to Part V where we return to Don's pov. I thought I knew how many chapters it would contain, but it just keeps growing on me, so I'm not even going to try and guess what it will be. Suffice it to say, it will be the longest part of the fic.

[valeriev84]

Lol!

Yes, but you're not Donny's father. Alan has a totally different take on things, he also isn't fully grasping the fact that breaking him is exactly what Frazer wants.

[loozy]

"That federal blood tasted exquisite."

That sentence just sent a shiver down my spine, it just sounds so eeeeeeevil *shudder*

Brilliant, as usual... Oh, so brilliant and tense and sad and angsty and brilliant and gut- wrenching... And did I mention brilliant?

[valeriev84]

No, you didn't mention that.
*blushes*

Yes, it is supposed to be evil. That's the point.
:D

Thanks!

Oh, I probably got another chapter written on the train yesterday.

[loozy]

Yeah, brilliant, I think was the word I mentioned :P

And yay about the new chapter :D

I'm just about to whump Don a bit *devilish twinkle*

[valeriev84]

Yay! More Don whump. Which fic are you working on?

[valeriev84]

Wow, that probably took you a while.

My, my, Frazer's psychopathic tendencies seem to be a bit contagious here, look at you, 'carving' coming to mind.
:)

As for Coop, well, you'll see.