FIC: In a Mirror, Darkly: Chapter 14/?

[valeriev84]

Title: In a Mirror, Darkly: Chapter 14
Author: Valerie Vancollie (valeriev84 [at] hotmail.com)
Characters: Don, Charlie, Alan, David, Colby, Nikki, (surprise)
Pairings: brief canon mentions of Charlie/Amita & Don/Robin
Rating: 15
Summary: There was a certain irony to the situation, that the brother who was a federal agent had been abducted to be

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[valeriev84]

Well, slightly longer than normal, that is chapter 14, I hope you liked it. As you can see, it contains the first part of the scene to which I referred to earlier. The rest of it makes up the whole of chapter 15, which will be up soon. Normally I'd say Friday, but I'm traveling that day, so I can't promise it will go up then, though I'll definitely try.

Not sure if you noticed it or not, but I couldn't help but make Alan shiver as he passed the place where Don was assaulted at CalSci. He wrote it off as nerves and the emotions from what has happened, but we know better :D

[loozy]

Oh God.

[valeriev84]

Wow, thanks!

:D

[loozy]

Couldn't think of anything better to say ;)

[valeriev84]

Sometimes a few words are all that's necessary.

[valeriev84]

Yay!

I hope you're feeling better now.

[admiralandrea]

Haven't had a chance to comment for a while. Still enjoying this. Poor Alan! Glad Charlie decided to go to David and the others for help in the end.

[valeriev84]

Good to know I didn't loose you, thanks for commenting.

Poor everyone, I think, when all is said and done. I've been a little mean to them all.
:)

Yep, Charlie finally went to the team, but not nearly soon enough unfortunately.