Cages

[valerienne]

Title: Cages
Author: valerienne
Rating: PG
Pairing: Billy/Dom
Warnings: Angsty, umm, yeah. Slightly AUish, because we know Billy was given his dog by a friend, but hey, poetic licence, right? :)
Disclaimer: The peaceful night was broken by the hooting of a very gifted bat... As real as that.
Notes: This was written for the light_the_sky76, in grateful and delighted

Comments

[matildabj]

Awww, lovely! Poor Bills.

[valerienne]

Well, it makes a change. I ususally give all the angst to Dom :)

[blueruin26]

That was lovely. You gave Billy such wonderful presence, thought and mind. It's quite beautiful actaully. Different. I like it.

[valerienne]

Not quite sure the voice is right, but well. It would be a lot easier if I could think in a Scottish accent, you know? Can't though. Hell, listen to me, I'll shut up moaning now :)

[blueruin26]

Well, I think you did a fine job with finding Billy's voice. It seems most of the time Dom is by far the more angsty of the two, so it's refreshing to see Billy in this light. As well as seeing a story that's devoted for the most part to his thought process.

[valerienne]

Well that's me being lazy, in a way, since I hate writing dialogue :) I can't be as funny as the lovely Billy and Dom Show, and I hate getting it wrong. But such wonderful comments make life all worthwhile!

[valerienne]

Ah, but he does get a puppy! See me being kind! :)

[pippinmctaggart]

What a lovely little snippet of a character study. Billy's voice was very strong in this. Thank you for sharing! :)

[valerienne]

That makes me feel better! I'm never as confident with my Billy voice as I am with my Dom's. Thank you!

[herm42]

This was EXCELLENT. I haven't read your stuff before this... *scampers off to find your stash*

[valerienne]

Have fun! Hope you enjoy. This is almost entirely a fic journal, so it's all here...