The Occam's razor job - Chapter 33 - 2

[valawenel]

Title: The Occam's razor Job
Characters: Nate Ford, Eliot Spencer, Alec Hardison, Parker, Sophie Deveraux, Patrick Bonnano
Fandom: Leverage
Spoilers:  The Lonely Hearts Club Job, The Boy's night out Job
warnings: Dead people, language, violence, medical bullsh*t, extreme violence in later chapters, and extreme angst
Disclaimer: I do not own blah blah

Comments

[jesco0307]

I love the parts in Eliot's head, a bit confused, are we? Although, probably still dangerous within seconds. I love how Nate and Sophie calm him down in different ways, that's very sweet.

But oh, Eliot. Still thinking, still convinced he has to leave because he'd kill them/get them killed if he stayed.

And I'm very confused, who's the man? I feel like I should know and don't.

So, next chapter, please? :D

[valawenel]

Yes, two of them do that, more subtle, in normal life, so I just took that reactions and put them in the fever situation - it seemed like something they WOULD do that way.

In E's head, nothing really changed - for him, situation is the same, no matter that he is now in the apartment. All problems remained the same. In the next chapter that starts to change, and that process is likely the most demanding thing I wrote 'till now :doh:

Don't be confused with the man, you'll KNOW when you read the next one, you'll remember :D I don't leave the loose ends around :D

I thought to tell you to wait with readings this one, because the last chapter is sent to Trapper yesterday, so you had a chance to read it all together - it would be much better because it's really connected, but I was late.
The next, last one... well, it has 34 000 words :doh: It'll have to be devided in almost six parts, so don't start to read it unless you have one hour and a half to spare :D